this was brilliant! I loved it, pleeze make a sequel.

this was great i thought it should have ended this way too

I don't know about Bertie, but definitely send Ariel to hug me! Great story... I am not really a big fan of "fluff", but I think this was just enough of it. :) Thanks.

Aw this is real cute:) I just finished So Silver Bright and bawled my eyes out when Ariel left (I literally had mascara running down my cheeks) I really like this ending! Good job.

Thank you sooooo much for writing this! I HATED the way the actual book ended so this story was like my birthday had come for a little while! Such a good story, you captured Ariels' feelings perfectly!

Shiara Daydream

really good. i like ariel better than nate too. i didn't like how he disappeared. nice story. we need more in this archive.