Please don't abandon this! I love what you've written so far, and I hope that you continue it!

"Rouge" is red, "rogue" is the word you were actually looking for. Whenever you have typed "rougish" to describe Yates, I can only picture him blushing excessively.

I like this story. I know that it's been a while since you updated but if you get a chance, please do update. What memories were returned to Karigan?

I am a huge Green Rider fan and Yates has always been one of my favorites. I loved this piece about him and Karigan. If Kristen Britain hadn't killed him off in Blackveil :( I would have put them together in a heartbeat. I liked the ending, it wrapped things up nicely, but leaves you an open end to go back and add more if you so desired. Great writing!

Liked it! Keep it up pls.

AHHHHHHH YATES!

A delightful little short about my favourite rider 3 ... almost perfectly in character and I can tell you were very much inspired by that chapter in FRC!

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as an aside - WHY is it that I picture Yates's drawing in his sketchbook as Karigan (and Condor) from Darden or at least the urban legend version ;D ? Please tell me you meant for that to happen and its not all in my head!

oh, i really like the idea of kari and Yates. To me he seems to be a much more reasonable choice for kari to fall in love with.

i would love to read more :)

I enjoyed this lil'ol romance,very much so. I would be pleased to read from u again,and i do go cross eyed at the idea of Yates and Karigan,simply pleasing...Thank you!

I loved it Rhii, I thought that it was so cute. I definately think that you should a fanfic that's KxY. The idea is very original and I think that KxY could go a long way. Good job.