|Reviews for Wedding Night Mishap|
| itachi010 4/26/13 . chapter 24
thank you for sharing this fic, it really is an amazing read, well thought-out detailed descriptions that really show the dedication and sheer amount of research poured into this fic, add in one of my fave pairings (starrk x ichigo), it’s a definite win
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 24
Just for that, for ruining her bed, the black cat will truly prove why they are called the harbingers of bad luck. She might get Ichigo off the hook, he is her favorite student after all, and it was not his fault, but the other two, especially with his smug they will look when she sees them? Oh yeah, they are in for a world of pain
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 23
Well, as disturbing as those images are, my fantasy gets stuck on imagining of what happened between the scientist. Oh, it can imagine the possible forms they took, and some of the action that had to take place, but combining them? Nah, it has a sense of self preservation
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 22
My only question is, what about Ichiro? Did they leave him for his grandpa too?
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 21
Zangetsu looks so serious, somber and dignified, that even when he jokes it takes some time to understand, that yes, he just told a joke. And he does, from time to time
On side note, what about Ichigo's friends? Did they visit? When is Orihime and Uryuu wedding, what happened to Keigo, Mizuiro, Tatsuki, Chad and all his other classmates?
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 20
Great timing, another day and they would've had to postpone the wedding and try for another child, this time legitimate
And I'm pretty sure Isshin could get out of that kido, on the other hand it was cast by Stark.
For the next 3 months, both places will have to be on hold, at least in regards to Stark and Bya-bo, as they will be too busy and too tired to run their clans
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 19
Heh, impatient much? Though after the show Shiro put out, no wonder
Ichigo should be more careful, giving free reign to Grimmjow is never a good idea, he would take full advantage of it to embarrass the orange head
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 18
The rivalry between those two is still alive, good to know. Though Ichigo is way outclassed unfortunately. Oh well, he can always enjoy revenge lTer
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 17
All those challenges and all, and the end you just say "they travelled for long, suffering bouts of darkness and light, and fought numerous battles, blah blah", um, what the? Completely destroyed the flow
Poor Ukitake, but his division is the one that deals with negotiations anyway, so it will just add another realm I guess. And it does clear many problems even before they arose
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 16
Well, that was hot. And frustrated and angry Ichigo has a tendency of going Hulk on barriers before him. The King is gonna be in for a surprise
And I still wonder is Shiro is gonna get materialized to give birth, or if Ichigo is gonna end up with 4 babies, one of them a purely mental one
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 15
Umm, considering Ukitake is quite frail of health, I really hope he doesn't have a really bad timing on his relapse. And if Ichigo wakes up at any point, the King is gonna be in for an earful from him
Lets just hope Shiro is too deep asleep. Imagine him coming out, scoffing at the King and state imperiously "I have only one King, and ya ain't him"
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 14
A random though, if vacuum means 'void', why do we have an appliance called "vacuum cleaner"? At least in Russian the name means "dust absorber" or "dust sucker" (hmm, double meaning here)...
Oh, and you still need to give credit where it's due, that puzzle is paraphrase of the puzzle from HP after all
And I was waiting for them to wise up and use Lily to attack. I guess having control can be a detriment sometimes. If they were not as coordinated, Lily could've accidentally crashed into the guy a long time ago
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 13
Heh, told you so. With his luck and bull headedness he would've got involved in the process one way or the other
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 12
Too convenient, certain things. And I so hoped it would Ichigo who has the final say. Anyway, it was just an arbitrary decision, so it might still change. Between those three, no matter what they say, the final decision in any conflict will be after Ichigo
And I really hope they will return within a day or 2, otherwise Ichigo will just storm the place, and with his luck end up the King. After all there was that tidbit everyone seems to disregard, that all other hopefuls who entered the room, never came back
| mist shadow 4/8/13 . chapter 11
Those two, I bet the glass spheres being so fragile was deliberate. After all they did need a bigger sample of responses, if Szayel was a control
If those two keep it up, sooner or later Ichigo will get fed up and end up being the one with the final say, as it happened here
Umm, Ukitake was a captain for much longer than 100 years, he is one of the 4 oldest captains around after all, and he and Kyoraku were among the first graduates of the Academy established by Yamamoto. And considering the Quincy war happened 1000 years ago, yeah...