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| Reviews for Those Three Words |
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   ShiningEmerald0 1/17/13 . chapter 1:-) I really like this. |
| Ipizzippy 12/15/12 . chapter 1 OMG! You have to continue this! I think it's gonna be great. |
| Anonymous 6/1/12 . chapter 1 I really want you to continue. Your writing is amazing! |
| GleekingSam 3/23/12 . chapter 1 Your writing is excellent! Please update this story. |
| iridebrooms 3/4/12 . chapter 1 woah, you're amazing. It's like reading the book! you should continue. |
| JessLovesBrasil 2/19/12 . chapter 1 great so far :) update soon? |
| alltimelowmaria 2/16/12 . chapter 1 thats really good! you should post more! |
| Areias 1/27/12 . chapter 1 An interesting start :) Looking forward to more. |
| carmencielle 1/23/12 . chapter 1 Cute premise, great story, good potential... Update soon! |
| Lahiwe 1/21/12 . chapter 1 This is a good beginning-I like the direction the story is going in, and I hope you decide to continue it further! However, Bryce seems a little OOC-mostly because of his inner dialogue. He uses big words and complex syntax, like this: "I was dead, in both a literal and figurative sense." It doesn't sound very much like the same Bryce who would say "Lynetta was pissed," "Buddy beware," "scoop a chicken coop full of poop" etc. Bryce is smart, but he probably does not read as much as Juli and therefore his language isn't as sophisticated. However, you have him and Garrett characterized really well, and the issue I stated above is easily fixed. Again, waiting to read more! |
