|Reviews for The Path to Peace|
| Guest 1/15/13 . chapter 7
I like the story but did they get together dud just saying!:)
| ShinyShiza 9/21/12 . chapter 7
Omg! I read everything! This was amazing! Sorry you haven't heard from me in a while... You're doing fantastic! Keep it up!
| Angel 3/20/12 . chapter 7
Plz make chapter 7!
I really like the story
| Guest 3/17/12 . chapter 1
Really good! Keep up the good work
| dragonsofthe8elements 1/11/12 . chapter 6
| Mrjet 1/11/12 . chapter 6
Another interesting chapter. I liked it, but I'm not sure about Po. Did achieving inner peace really make Po that wise? He seems to be channeling Oogway. I guess I could accept Po gaining the insight to help Tigress deal with her inner turmoil, but he doesn't seem like Po. I would see him as still having the somewhat goofy humor and using it in explaining the process to Tigress. Anyway, all that is just nit-picking on my part. This is a serious problem for Tigress and Po is trying to be serious in helping her solve it. And there was Po's soup analogy at the end :)
I don't know if you are too concerned about typos. but I noticed a couple of them:
1. "It was to much for her to take, she hastily built her walls back around the memories hiding from them as she had done since her early days." It should be "It was too ..."
2. "your only mistake was trying to take your memories once by one." I think you meant "take your memories one by one".
So, to wrap-up: Good job and I am looking forward to more.
| ShinyShiza 1/10/12 . chapter 1
So TRUE! I LOVE it! I also love PoM (Penguins of Madagascar) Poke'mon and many other shows and animes! (Japanese animations)
| Mrjet 1/9/12 . chapter 5
Good story! I think this is the first story I have seen on the site that considers the possibility that Tigress might react negatively to Po learning so much so quickly. Of course, there are a number that explore Po and Tigress' relationship and Tigress and Shifu's daughter/father relationship. The second movie makes it pretty clear that Po and Tigress have feelings for one another (that relationship is what drew me to the Kung Fu Panda section of fanfiction).
I do like the way you are portraying Po and Tigress. Tigress certainly seems like she would hold in her feelings. And Po seems like he would push her to reveal what is bothering her.
I'm afraid I rarely have much useful advice or criticism for the authors on this site. I just enjoy reading the stories, especially the good ones. So, thanks for the good beginning and I am looking forward to more!