This story, I very much enjoyed reading. It was well written and kept my attention.

I think I've said all that I think of the majority of this story in our emails. For the stuff you've added, I'd say a job well done as usual! I really think adding the little 'fight' with Wulf was a nice touch and I think you wrote it well. You kept them both in character and I like how you didn't just make them 'kiss and make up'. The ending with Azeem was great and like I've mentioned to you before, I really can imagine Azeem perfectly with how you write him. You're brilliant at him! His last line got me the most and Will's thoughts. God, he's such a tortured soul! Bless him!

Well Done with this and I can't wait for your next creation! :)

When you said you'd added a part with Wulf, I was so excited because a part of me really needed them to ... well, need each other, I suppose. Then I remembered that this is YOU we're talking about ... of course it's gonna be more complicated than that! :D

It was great though, I like that you included Wulf in the end there, and I like even more the part with Azeem in the end. I don't know why, for sure. I think it may have something to do with how you write them. And how Azeem and Will is just well-written in any of your stories. And how they have the potential of being ... well, if not friends, then at least friendly with each other. I said potential, not that they ARE ... as shown by the end here.

All in all, I loved it though. But you already know that. :p

Great story! I love the idea, it's nice to see the characters a bit more in depth. I agree with Azeem, I don't think Will has it in him to murder someone. Thanks

I love this story! It was awesome! Please do write more. I also really like the Hownblower films though I wish Kennedy didn't die! :(