Wow.
That came as a big blow. Great Chappie!
However, I noticed some small errors here and there, but no probs other than that.

Brilliant Chapter! You found an amazing spot of an ending. It leaves us wondering what could have gone wrong. Did the game become a flop? Did some one get fired? Full of mystery…
Anyways, I spot a few errors there and there, so you might want to re-check the story for them.

Yay! lol ive been waiting for this to update forever. I hope you can begin updating consistently now!

Actually a good idea for a story.

The way I play game dev story, is I IMMEDIATELY start a game, then bla bla bla... then when its over I dont care about the reviews, because I learnt that at the start everyone hates you. Then I take a contract job, another game, contract, game, contract... cycle goes on and on.
Anyways, keep writing!

lol, I love this story :) i always wondered what game dev story would be like in real life. Hahah, it takes me 5 years before I make any sort of profit. xP Hope you keep continuing the story!

Loved it. Keep it up!

im too lazy to sign in. but i demand another chapter. keep up the good work its shaping up to be a good story. i dunno why nobody else reviews it.

This was a thoroughly enjoyable chapter. Do you plan on making more? I thought this was a very interesting story premise. It was well written, had good grammar, and a little humor thrown in. All in all it was good. I'm interested to see where you go with the story.

P.S. This is my first review so if it sucks... sorry. And I made an account just for this.