Definitely interest! I haven't read the rest yet, but so far so good :D

My favorite chapter!

:) *Pedo smile* *Gets hit by a flower*

Cute.
Hector is happy :)
And wow Luce is Coop's age and around Hecky's age.
Rach is really young.
Bah wish this was longer.

T_T
How abrupt.
Though a year? Some American marriages aren't a day lol.

I'll take Hector! He's such a sweet charming man. Well unless he decides to be with airplane chick or someone else :p actually nah, let him have fun.

So I wasn't alone in thinking that about their dynamic, Rach doms Luce lol.

I just saw the movie today and golly the ending was good but I wanted MOAR.

And you're writing more than the other writers and it's all very adorable and all :)

This is awesome! You should continue

Love this :)

I have decided that you must write more chapters. In fact you must write out, in detail, the next 12 years of Rachel and Luce's lives. Around 200 more chapters should cover it. Put lots of sexy bits in. Make them more explicit, too.

Apologies if this is inconvenient for you, but you really should have thought of that before starting a story as good as this.

I have a whole menagerie of venomous creepy-crawlies to threaten you with if you're lacking motivation...

That was awesome I wish they could of added that in the movie

Thanks, mirelurk. Nothing to be sorry for. The other readers should thank you. :D

A well timed scorpion can be very effective, but make a habit of it and yeah, it can cause undesired results.

Hey, sorry for pressuring you, I just wanted this story to be concluded because I was enjoying it and couldn't wait to get to the best part ;).

I understand completely about lack of inspiration, and I also share your pain, as I don't have a girlfriend either - possibly due to my habit of dropping scorpions down people's pants at the slightest provocation. Hmmm...

Hey

I loved this fanfic. I just wanted to know when you are going to put the last part? I simply can't wait.. please hurry up :p

Best

Not gonna happen, is it? You have no idea how many fics I've seen die just before the final chapter. It must be a curse.

Anyway, my patience with this evil has finally run out, I refuse to wait any longer. Put up chapter V immediately or I'll put a scorpion down your pants.