why did you end it !
it's a good storie but
you should write more

this is a great story
but it ends a little wierd
there should be a lot of chapter
with
jarod the new home
what happend to miss parker
what happend to the rest?
what...
what/...?but after all
it is a good story
only you should have write more

omg, I loved that story. ) Brie

Nice job! I enjoyed reading this.

No no, that can't be the end. We were just getting to the good part, weren't we? Oh I wanted to see Jarod and Miss Parker settle down with a their ready-made family! I mean they already have a teenager and a 1 year old to raise not to mention any new kids they might conceive together. And by the way, where is Baby Parker? And whose child is he? Does Jarod cure Lyle's affliction, since he created it? Well if this fic is over, I really think you need to write a sequel! Pretty Please?

This was a wonderful story! Loved it!

All right now...

you've gone & gotten me *so* involved in this story & it's not finished? :)

PLEASE! Add some more to this story soon! :)

Woah! Talk about some serious twists to history! I am really looking forward to the destruction of the Centre with these documents!

Have I told you before how much I enjoy this fic? Cuz I do! You just keep adding these twists & I for one am going to be sorry when it comes to an end. Loved the latest chapter!

Mel

So Bridget is Jacob's daughter...creepy...this is really twisted. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Melanie Jamieson-Parker,

I too are a huge MPJ shipper but I liked Zoe and I think that in giving Jarod a daughter she completed something wonderful. I do not think it was going to far. If you didn't like that I highly doubt you are going to like the next two chapters. However, since you have been a dedicated reader I will think about doing two different versions.

DumbOldDork,

Sketchy, yes, but that's the point.

The writer

This is really good, a bit sketchy, but good. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Hey you were doning great with story up until middle of Chapter 18 & chapter 19. You did good not saying ZOE in this story, but go ahead it would of be nice of her died but also to give Jarod a daughter. You went to far for that. I'm shipper of MPJR. I like it that way. You could write two version of chapter 18 & 19. An see what people like.

MORE MORE MORE MORE

Please...the suspense is unbearable. What happens next?

I'm loving this story! It's really confusing, but that only makes it all the more interesting! I hope you continue it!