I can't wait to read what happens next!

love this story...i hear hawk's voice telling me the story ans love rhe way u write

Another great chapter!

Poor Hawkeye, even in the middle of a tornado and he can't get Margaret to open up and talk about herself!

The cats and the empty fish tin. Too funny! This chapter is a great beginning!

This story is really good! Look forward to more!

I'm glad you're still updating this story. I'm really enjoying it. Thank you :)

Favourite part: "In the glare of the headlights, flashlights and sodium lamps during triage, Margaret seemed to glow. His shaking hands ached to touch her."

Oh no! How dare you end it on a cliff hanger? I will be impatiently awaiting your next update! ...please hurry ;)

Aww this was a very adorable chapter. The little picnic, so romantic. And then boom. An explosion. What's happened? I hope no one is hurt. . . . Great chapter! I am loving this story!

Aww, poor Hawkeye. Just trying to save her live and almost killed her in the process. That's a story to tell the grand kids. ;)

You're killing me with these one liners: "Pierce, sometimes you're a pain. Sometimes you're an insufferable drunk who throws up on people…" & "Great horny toads," he sighed.

And my gawd! Is the unit destroyed!? Must . . .find . . .out!

This is totally like a Mash episode! Charles' thoughts and actions were hilarious and I totally see that happening! As were Radar's and Kilngers', and oh, "We're off to see the Wizard!" Oh my god, I've never laughed so hard.

Your story has all the drama and humor of a mash episode. And I am rally glad I came cross this.

""Move 'em out and Klinger, your slip's showing," barked Potter." & "Privately he thought that was worst advice ever. Why was he going to a Catholic priest for insight into women?" - hilarious! I laughed out aloud for a few moments. Great lines!

I am really liking the caring side of Hawkeye. And I really enjoyed this chapter.

I am really liking this. Everyone seems to be in character and the description is great. And I loved the exhibits A,B,C - A was too true and funny. Great start to your story. Now I am really curious about Hawkeye/Margaret and the weather.

I've lived in New England my entire life, and never have I once heard some call themselves a "New Englander". Hawkeye, since he's from Maine, would most likely call himself a "Mainer".
Great story.

Well I have to say that since I live in Tornado Alley that was a on edge for me! Keep it coming. I like what I am reading!