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Tactic
6/11/02 . chapter 3
Have to say that I love the work and certainly enjoy the way that you portray Mario and Akane. Keep it up and I hope that you can get some more parts up soon. If you need any help (prereader/proofreader/whatever) just give me a ring and I'd love to help yeh out.
Aleh
6/10/02 . chapter 3
Spelling. You *REALLY* need to correct it.
Garfish
5/13/02 . chapter 2
Good chapter but you really need someone who is fluent in english and has spellchecker to edit your works so they are right.
Lord Gaav
5/13/02 . chapter 1
Not a bad start, but you seemed to channel Yoda and Dr.Suess in your writing.
Kawaii-e
5/13/02 . chapter 1
Thanks! I Almost Forget that... It is yet in the second Chap.

More will follow..
neko-chama
5/12/02 . chapter 2
At least acknowledge Nintendo, in the disclaimer, for the use of Princess Peach. It's only fair, since you do Rumiko Takahashi already.

Anyway, enough about the disclaimer. I really can't say much, until I read more. I am writing this when chapter 2 is not quite finished, btw.
sunamee
5/12/02 . chapter 1
make it a peach+ranma pairing. a lot of shampoo, ukyo and akane pairings out there. want to orginal pairings
BlazingMew
5/12/02 . chapter 1
I think you should stick with Peach since there already many Ranma/Akane, Ukyo, and Shampoo pair. A new kind of character could use in the story.
Jaywild1
5/12/02 . chapter 1
More of this fic please
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