OK, seems that both you and the fanfic are warming up. I like this part more than its predecessors. Continue.

More! More! this is getting GREAT. Don't forget to vote at the Ani-Fic awards 2K!

A few spelling mistakes, but your story was good.

He He He! Okay, Really short, but that's Really okay, because I Really like this story! Really? Really!keep writing, and faster!