I'd be his "fake" fiance any day, lol really good story

Loved it! I hope you continue with this story.

Great story. I loved part one also by the way. I hope you continue.

Oh, I loved this. Totally got invested in your characters and really hope you continue the story after the contest.

I love the level of detail you included - such as this:

"The waitress sat Edward's beer in front of him, and he gave her a quick glance saying a quiet 'thank you', before turning his focusing back on me. It took her a few seconds to realize he wasn't going to give her any more attention."

Good luck!

So sweet! Thanks for writing!

I love it.

very cute.

I know some one who met someone on line and they are still together.o]

Thank you!

Thanks for entering the contest! Good luck! :D

This was really sweet, and I liked them both very much! By the end, I found myself wishing them the best of luck, and so, I with YOU the best of luck too, in the contest. Cheers!

I made the unfortunate mistake of reading this as a chapter, not a story. It really drew me in, and I'm very sad it is over now.

Great good, I loved it!

Please continuing, they have great chemistry!

Good luck!

So sweet! I love it and hope you will continue. Best of luck!

Nice! waiting for the next chapter :)

OH MY GOD! I loved that and I better be alerted if and hopefully when it is extended. Life has been pure sh*t lately and I need a fun love story. This sounds like it could be so wonderful!

Great story! I want to read more about these two!