Great story! I especially loved the ending! I was so scared that you actually killed them all for a moment. I kind of wish that, minus the suspected murder and sui/homicides at the end that it was real.

that was intense

i did find a few errors(gramatical)

very good though

Brandon

damn that was a great story...one of the best ive read of them so far :D

wow. very good story... You fully developed your ideas... which is rare in a fan fiction... but much appreciated. You had great descriptions...but you didn't get over zealous and describe EVERYTHING... also appreciated. The sex was portrayed as being beautiful, not just porn... also very awesome. :) My biggest critique for you is to watch your spelling. You had several simple spelling errors... like leaving the "y" off of "every." I would suggest having a friend proff read your work... sometimes there are errors the author just can't see. Other than that, it was awesome... Muy Bien!

IT WAS A DREAM?Oh..
ok.
heh heh , bitter sweet story, very talented. Well anyways...
CHOCOLATE ORANGES!
-Lili(MEB)

That was BRILLIANT! I thought Peter really did blow up that place and I had a tear running down my face. Then I read the end and thought "better get rid of this tear before someone sees me!" :)

Great story love to see more of them.

ME

I love this story except the end sorry I'm not one for the 'it was all a dream' stories. But I still loved it. I must say it was an interesting view of what may happen. Five stars to the writer! I like the ghost gypsy touch too.

This was an awesome story Akula. I loved the ending, great twist. However, in my opinion, that would make for a horrible Spiderman Part II. _

omg...that was so good...at the ending i was laughing...ya laughing..cause i though of everyting that happened...and then he juss woke up..omg...exellent! plz write anyother story

p.s. u have talent

Hello!

I LOVE this story!

I read the first couple of chapters on (he's lovely, isn't he?) and I wanted MORE! I found FanFiction through a friend and I found your Spiderman story.

I thought the twsit was great. I was seriously thinking Peter was going to burn down the mansion with Harry, Mj and little unborn Parker jr.

The tarot cards are wonderful. (I'm a big tarot person...thing...taroist..oh, you know what I mean) Isn't the angel Temperance? It's okay, it worked great even though the 'Angel' card doesn't actually exist.

But, you're a talented writer, will go onto great things and I look forward to reading more soon!

love Emily-Maguire

Good story. Interesting ending. _

This is awsome! I can't wait for Harry to get caught! _

That was good. At this point I'm ready to see Harry fry! _

Very good, but I hope we get a happy ending. _

That was good, but I would dearly love to smack Harry one! He deseves it! _