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| hugsxkisses 2005-10-16 ch 12,  | abusegr ur not updating! update update update! ur hanging ppl near the end it its painful to wakt for such a good story! 2 yrs!! |
| Natasha 2005-10-02 ch 12, anon. | abuseplz plz plz continue. it's getting so good |
| csicrazii 2005-06-17 ch 12, | abuseWOW! UPDATE SOON! AWSOME STORY! I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE! |
| Drusilla Braun 2005-05-07 ch 12, | abuseI like this cant wait till the next chapter |
| Katie 2004-11-30 ch 12, anon. | abuseIncredible story! But it needs an ending! *Hint, hint* I can't wait for the next chap, so update soon! BTW, did i mention that this is AWESOME! |
| Katie 2004-11-30 ch 12, anon. | abuseIncredible story! But it needs an ending! *Hint, hint* I can't wait for the next chap, so update soon! BTW, did i mention that this is AWESOME! |
| instantglow 2004-10-23 ch 12, | abuseSuch an incredible story. Suspense, mystery, fabulous! |
| Olivia Sutton 2004-06-30 ch 12, | abuseHi-- I like it! I have a preference for story with an actual case that gets solved, and so far this is turning into a pretty good case. Your characterisation is pretty good. I think Grissom's a bit too calm--he should be going nuts with first Catherine being kidnapped, then her surgery, then Sara's kidnapping--with the CSI's being picked-off one-by-one he's gotta be nervous (Gil IS protective of his people). But still, your characterisation is pretty good. Some parts of the story seem a bit rough, you might want to smooth things out a bit. And all the CSI's are professionals, including Brass--so they should be swearing without a real reason. But those are my only complaints, really. Please, please continue--I'd like to read more. --Olivia |
| ggirl72 2004-06-20 ch 12, | abuseomigod that was an amazing story write more soon |
| Rebecca 2004-06-11 ch 12, anon. | abuseReally good story so far. It's holding my interest and I can't wait until it's finished. Keep writing, I want to find out how it ends. Really well done, it reminds me of a professionally written book. Let me know when you finish it so I can finally find out how it ends. |
| marf 2004-04-20 ch 12, anon. | abusegreat story...when are you going to finish it? |
| Arka 2003-12-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseget the next chapter up soon! i want to know what's going to happen to Sara etc... |
| lpgohanfanatic 2003-12-07 ch 12, | abuseThat was good. Update soon! |
| Nepeace 2003-09-26 ch 11, | abuseGreat story, I really like it. The suspence it superb Nepeace |
| KellyTyler521 2003-08-11 ch 11, | abuseOk, someone must kill this guy. I'll be back for more next month or so. |