PLEASE UPDATE!

-CandyFreak211

UPDATE!

Yo girl :) sorry I haven't been responding. Horrible Internet connection :O anyway... Great job as usual :) grammar is a bit off, and u have a lot of run on sentences, making the story slightly confusing :) but all in all... Updateeeeee :)

its good just alot of little mistakes but its really good! update soon! :)

I like the story but it seems to choppy and unrealistic, for example Kristen couldn't have considered Cam to be like a brother after one period and there isn't much detail or plot it's more of this happens then this then this but no depth to it

i really liked this story, but you kinda switch POV'S a little too much. anyways update soon

Heehee :) loving the cherry :) it was so good :) update!