 bgcgjn 2/13/12 . chapter 4 i loved this chapter
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 a 'me 2/12/12 . chapter 4 Nice chapter! I like how you introduced Akane into the storyline. The interaction between Shizuru and her felt very natural. Shizuru's campaign speech was really good too. I would have voted for her. Don't feel bad about lack of reviews; you would probably be getting more feedback if you were writing a romantic storyline as opposed to friendship. Personally, I feel this story is great because it's focusing on Shizuru's character development. Keep up the good work! |
 cf 2/11/12 . chapter 4 i love this story
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 JelliedMilk 2/11/12 . chapter 4I am really enjoying your story so far. You do an excellent job on creating Shizuru's character and personality altogether. Very well-build and constructed story. I do look forward to your future chapters
Keep it up! |
 Iuterpi 2/1/12 . chapter 3It is interesting. See how Shizuru is falling and falling for the girl. Cute and sad at te same time. Contrast. Just like Shizuru and Natsuki are. |
 Athena Sampaio 1/31/12 . chapter 3This story is great! A lot of people have tried to tell the Shizuru x Natsuki story pre-Carnival from Shizuru's POV, but no one has managed to do it as well as you. The story is incredibly well-written, rich in details and you clearly are pay attention and carefully building up characterization and plot development. Nice job! Please update soon, I can't wait for more! |
 bmv 1/30/12 . chapter 3 i love this chapter
ooohhhhhh please continue fast |
 OneSoberRussian 1/29/12 . chapter 3Wow, what a drama scene!
wonderfully written btw!
Definitely looking forward to chap.4!
Thank you, for your work) |
 OneSoberRussian 1/29/12 . chapter 2)) I like it, when Shizuru is a sleepyhead!
And I really like how the story goes. |
 OneSoberRussian 1/29/12 . chapter 1Great story, finally I have time to read it ) |
 lostangelvn 1/28/12 . chapter 1Did Shizuru become Kaichou for Natsuki's sake in Natsuki's Prelude? Oh, this is an AU after all. Thank you for your hard work. |
 a 'me 1/18/12 . chapter 2 You chose a fitting title. A good title is just as important as the first couple paragraphs. It draws your readers' attention and pulls them into the story. This chapter was fun! I like how you've humanized Shiz. She's a late riser, her hormones are inconvenient, and she isn't in perfect control of her emotions. Seeing her relate to her peers is both funny and insightful. I lol'ed at Chie's punishment. Stroke of genius! It's good to see the way Shiz and Reito interact with each other. I get the feeling Reito may be aware of her sexuality, possibly attempting to help her come to terms with it and offering her camo. I also thought it was important how she noticed a subtle difference between how she felt between Nat and Reito. She notices a unique feeling for Nat and a need to please her and gain her acceptance. Great chapter! I'm looking foward to more! |
 Urooj 1/16/12 . chapter 2 It's really good. Please continue. |
 qaths10 1/16/12 . chapter 2I had read almost no one on the point of view of Shizuru.
brilliant
Continual |
 srgtgs 1/16/12 . chapter 2 i love this chapter
please continue fast |