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bgcgjn 2/13/12 . chapter 4
i loved this chapter

please continue fast
a 'me 2/12/12 . chapter 4
Nice chapter! I like how you introduced Akane into the storyline. The interaction between Shizuru and her felt very natural. Shizuru's campaign speech was really good too. I would have voted for her. Don't feel bad about lack of reviews; you would probably be getting more feedback if you were writing a romantic storyline as opposed to friendship. Personally, I feel this story is great because it's focusing on Shizuru's character development. Keep up the good work!
cf 2/11/12 . chapter 4
i love this story

please continue fast
JelliedMilk 2/11/12 . chapter 4
I am really enjoying your story so far. You do an excellent job on creating Shizuru's character and personality altogether. Very well-build and constructed story. I do look forward to your future chapters

Keep it up!
Iuterpi 2/1/12 . chapter 3
It is interesting. See how Shizuru is falling and falling for the girl. Cute and sad at te same time. Contrast. Just like Shizuru and Natsuki are.
Athena Sampaio 1/31/12 . chapter 3
This story is great! A lot of people have tried to tell the Shizuru x Natsuki story pre-Carnival from Shizuru's POV, but no one has managed to do it as well as you. The story is incredibly well-written, rich in details and you clearly are pay attention and carefully building up characterization and plot development. Nice job! Please update soon, I can't wait for more!
bmv 1/30/12 . chapter 3
i love this chapter

ooohhhhhh please continue fast
OneSoberRussian 1/29/12 . chapter 3
Wow, what a drama scene!

wonderfully written btw!

Definitely looking forward to chap.4!

Thank you, for your work)
OneSoberRussian 1/29/12 . chapter 2
)) I like it, when Shizuru is a sleepyhead!

And I really like how the story goes.
OneSoberRussian 1/29/12 . chapter 1
Great story, finally I have time to read it )
lostangelvn 1/28/12 . chapter 1
Did Shizuru become Kaichou for Natsuki's sake in Natsuki's Prelude? Oh, this is an AU after all. Thank you for your hard work.
a 'me 1/18/12 . chapter 2
You chose a fitting title. A good title is just as important as the first couple paragraphs. It draws your readers' attention and pulls them into the story. This chapter was fun! I like how you've humanized Shiz. She's a late riser, her hormones are inconvenient, and she isn't in perfect control of her emotions. Seeing her relate to her peers is both funny and insightful. I lol'ed at Chie's punishment. Stroke of genius! It's good to see the way Shiz and Reito interact with each other. I get the feeling Reito may be aware of her sexuality, possibly attempting to help her come to terms with it and offering her camo. I also thought it was important how she noticed a subtle difference between how she felt between Nat and Reito. She notices a unique feeling for Nat and a need to please her and gain her acceptance. Great chapter! I'm looking foward to more!
Urooj 1/16/12 . chapter 2
It's really good. Please continue.
qaths10 1/16/12 . chapter 2
I had read almost no one on the point of view of Shizuru.

brilliant

Continual
srgtgs 1/16/12 . chapter 2
i love this chapter

please continue fast
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