 Pandora 2004-11-10 . chapter 1 WOot! Short and sweet. XD That was really good. Great job at portaying Lucius' arrogance and pride. tho I do think he'd be bleeding severely from punching the mirror. |
 RandomBabbling 2003-06-25 . chapter 1 Aw!
Lovely! Lucius is my favourite character after Draco of course, and besides Harry/Draco, Lucius/Severus is the best pairing!
Oh I'm babbling but I don't care, that was a beautiful sweet bit of fluff and I adore it!
Lex |
 D.L. SchizoAuthoress 2002-05-28 . chapter 1Oh please continue...!
I LOVE IT!
Yay, Armand!!
~~Schiz |
 two of hearts 2002-05-18 . chapter 1 I like it. Really, I do. |
 Muse of Lucius 2002-05-15 . chapter 1The nerve of it!
At first I was confused by your summary'pwp' and 'PG-13'in the same sentence - I couldn't wrap my brain around that. Now I understand.
Poor little Lucy. What a sulker! I wanted to slap him. (But I always want to slap him.)
I liked the story. Would there, could there, should there, ...be more??
Perhaps it could include some of the following:
So what exactly went on? hmmm? Why was Lucy all upset? Other than the fact that he was most notably angry that his subconcious lust for Severus was coming to the surface (maybe I'm inserting my own fantasies here.)
Nice job! |
 Morghaine 2002-05-14 . chapter 1Armand? Wow. Hi.
OK, comments.
I liked Lucius' thoughts on this...the anger that he feels over Severus' comments made all the clearer as Severus' ulterior motives seem to become apparent. I am off the read the sequel now. |
 YG 2002-05-13 . chapter 1 Nice ^^ tell me when you have the sequel, ok? ^^ |
 RiverPhoenix 2002-05-12 . chapter 1That was interesting, but it was a bit of an anticlimax.
It seemed to be building up to something really big, and being just a slash with Severus was a bit of a letdown.
And he was too distressed.
But i still liked it ^.^ |