Great story! I really enjoy your writing. I hope you will write something else soon. I think you really capture the characters well. It's interesting to think about Karen as someone who really isn't into all the money and everything. Well done!

That was a long torture but for a beautiful end... :)

I like a lot the fact you put Jack in there, at this exact moment. It gives him the weight he never really had in the show.

Damn, no. Not on a Sunday, rainy evening...

... ... ... You are damn lucky that I have some red wine to balance the whole thing.

I like a lot Karen's role in this story. There's something very true to the character. It makes the whole thing stronger.

It sounds as complex and bare as real life. Which is rare for a fanfic...

You know you are reading a good story when you can picture out every single moment as if you were watching a movie. And it is the case, right now.

Alright... I felt a little bad for Leon. So, hat off. Yet, it is still way too heartbreaking for a Sunday evening!

One day, you will have to stop writing heartbreaking chapters. Mainly because I am getting old and my poor heart won't go on!

No. Leon isn't going to come back because anyway, there are many other countries that need him.

Let's just get rid of that damn phone once and for all. I don't like it at all!

I liked a lot the face-to-face. And how Karen gave in, somehow.

I don't know if this was the end or not but this was a great Karen/grace storyline. with grace finally getting some balls and leaving her husband for her first love before Leo wounded things for them. and im glad Karen took her back

Its great that Karen not gonna let that mansion turn her into something she's not. And Jack still being there for her just proves he's a good friend and something that Karen needs right now. Grace is at the door (Gasp) !