you should update soon would love to hear something

Wow this is really good! I hope you continue with this story! I cant wait to see what happens next!

Youve got talent. Its close to the series keep writing

Like your story so far. Hope you update soon.

S:)

This such a great story elfmaiden! Great update, I want to actually write a story based on the ep. "The Violated" but, I wanna tweak it and have John-Boy around too, at least for a part of the story. I really, really, really, don't like the guy they get to replace the original John-Boy, he doesn't even have the mole. Plus he just doesn't fit in. The family was already made and Earl really shouldn't have attempted to bring the character back with someone else. Anyway, I just wanted to run an idea by you.

In the episode "The Violated", we see Son Slayter confront Olivia. But what instead of leaving, and Erin being in the house she went into work early, and Son Slayter had assaulted her? Just something I'd like to start writing. Though, I'm not gonna make Olivia all religous and what-not, or at least not mention it. Her baptis-ness, (I know not a word), sometimes gets in the way of things. But to each their own, right?

Anway, sorry for the babling. I love the update and can't wait to read more! Your stories are always awesome!

Nellie-Rose

Yes yes yes you finally updated poor John boy ... he really is sick. The whole family is so worried and really need to be. It don't look good ... poor JOhn boy .. but oh i love me some John boy angsty hurt comfort ... sigh .. can't wait for the next update.

I love this chapter! Please update soon!

Oh good I been waiting for an update on this story. I can't wait for your next chapter John Boy don't look like he's doing so well Olivia has a right to be worried. I think Curt really needs to check him out

This is a great story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I liked your vivid description of the winter weather, pulled me right in!

John-Girl Tabbi