OMG This was soooo cute. Loved it :D

This is a great story! Amazing job!

LOL

Oh, this is fun. I liked it muchly.

I felt so bad for Jake, as he just shoveled it down and TOOK it. I was so relieved when Bella confronted him with memories of what Jake already KNEW he could do.

And then he did it. :) Yay!

Go, Jake! "Hound her" indeed. lol

that was so sweet and fun. doog story.

This was such a cute story - I loved it

Can i just say you should write a Nessie and Jacob story... like really! i feel like u could do them justice - i have read sooo many story from the POV of them together in the future or w/e. They where all lacking in the story, grammar, plot and very OOC and I feel like u can be truest to these two characters / just my opinion (im sure many agree) )

one good advice from Bella

I loved it, very cute!