 Alexxis T. Swan 1/13/09 . chapter 1Now that was a realy cool twist to the original story. Thank you for writing this. I can't wait to read the sequel so I think I will. |
 Arabwel 4/3/03 . chapter 1 Wow... this is... interesting... I don't have much time to say what I want to say, but this is cool. You are GREAT! |
 Tanathir 5/20/02 . chapter 1A great mix of humor and intrigue. I'd write a longer review, but I'm too busy swooning over the Command Unit's "magnificent deep voice".
:-) |
 JastaElf 5/17/02 . chapter 1Oh my... ouch... wow.
I am running out of words to use. These are such intriguing stories! I'm not going to be able to view the Matrix movie in quite the same way, ever again...
Which is probably the highest compliment I can think of for fanfiction. VERY well done: chilling in its implications, and excessively cool. |
 Narsus 5/13/02 . chapter 1How sad... as I seem to keep saying: poor Brown. I like his rationlisation of his actions too. Smith's being particularly vindictive... so much so that you suspect that Trinity was his true love after all.
And Special Agent Anderson... Very interesting. |
 angelmad222 5/13/02 . chapter 1 How strange, Brown had a crush on Smith and in a fit of jealousy blew Trinity's head to bits, that was weird but good. Nice but strange ending. |
 PretendFan 5/12/02 . chapter 1That was...twisted. But very interesting. I really enjoyed it. |