  anon 5/19/12 . chapter 11 i really like yhis story
-Stryka- |
| Ashael Xanthus 4/7/12 . chapter 11 wowp! :D |
 Shiekah Tetra 4/4/12 . chapter 11Cant wait till the next one! |
| LilFunkyMonkey360 3/31/12 . chapter 11 aw, i love this story so much but what happened? iv been waiting for the next chapter but it never came D':
are you planning on doing anymore? i hope you do :) |
| Alranath 2/23/12 . chapter 11 THIS EZ SO MUCH CONDENSED AMAZ-MIRACU-TERRI-AWESOME-NESS!
Your grammar is wonderful, spelling is perfect, plot is liquid platinum, and their actions and reactions are more believable than most stories I've read in a long time. You've managed to make them seem like real people in real situations who forget things and remember unimportant things and(pauses for breath) They seam like they could actually Exist! That's always something I seem to find lacking in most Ghira-centric stories, but you've managed to hit the nail on the head.
Your description of the settings are golden as well, I never feel like I can't SEE where they are, even for the settings you've created. I truly love this story and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
P.S. You don't have to write a shmex scene if you don't want to, but this is one reader who would love for this story to end up with them Fully together. And there is no rule that says the story has to end right after they do(if they do) sleep together.
I Lurv This! ‼ ‼ |
| Red-Damascus-Steel 2/23/12 . chapter 11 I love how this is turning out, the chemistry between Link and Ghirahim is soooo good. You make Ghirahim more bad ass and less... creepy, like how he is in the game. He spelled "Rape" to me but you you've changed my thoughts of him. :) Can't wait for the next chapter :D |
| dbzfan8 2/21/12 . chapter 11 I can't wait for the next update! I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| Sideways Jill 2/20/12 . chapter 11 Beastly! :) Can't wait for the update! |
| Pilpols 2/20/12 . chapter 11 OMG MY LINK! AWW!
Yay sleepover! :D |
| Pilpols 2/20/12 . chapter 10 The longer the story the better! :D
OMG Lol Ghirahim is so cute at the ennnnnd! |
| Pilpols 2/20/12 . chapter 9 Awww :) |
| Pilpols 2/20/12 . chapter 8 :O! |
| Pilpols 2/20/12 . chapter 6 Ghirahim to the rescuuuuuue! :D |
| Pilpols 2/20/12 . chapter 5 POOR LINK! D: |
| SubZeroChimera 2/19/12 . chapter 11 Vaati at a mental health center? Hmm, I think Link's prediction may be off... by, uhm, perhaps a lot? Or maybe not, we'll see.
As long as he doesn't go off the deep end and try to find the fierce deity mask or something, all's good!
Actually, I wonder, would F.D. show up in this fic? |
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