this song really fits into the VHD mood. I don't know, but I was thinking of folk music (probably because it's REALLY LOUD in my SIS' ROOM!)and it went really well. I have chills going down my back!

really good. if you have any other songs you should post them.

I LOVE THIS POEM!

its beautiful! i love the chorus...

Ah, an interesting song to go along with the movie. You captured some of the theme and I thank you for that.

that was so b-e-autiful that would make an excellent song 2 #1 best seller *swoons* D! keep makin' more your g-r-e-a-t

hi. i agree with Lady Ravenshadow about the goth and music. i like metallica and i thought this song should be sent to them to do. the reason i say so is probable because i am listening to metallica as i type this but i could see how they could do it. and as i read it i was thinking of how it would sound if James (metallicas lead singer) would sound singing it. if you would like to tell me what you think about that please yell and scream at me or tell me you like the idea.

great poem, it really goes good with the movie

Personally I'm not one for songs and I have no sense of Rhytm, so I looked at this as a poem insteaed. It's very well done. I like it. Somehow it reminds me of Two-Edge's song on the Elfquest soundtrack. You probably never heard of Elfquest, but it's my favorite song on the CD and I've had the CD for four years now.

that was good! very good!

That was very nice _

WOW! That was absolutely stunnin the hair on the back ofmy neck stood up while reading this. As a lover of goth and darker type music, this could easily be the lyrics to one awesome song. Hope to see more of your work.