|Reviews for darkwing continued|
| ShadeLivesForever 1/15/12 . chapter 1
It's great for a start, but it can improve a lot in grammar and legibility. When you are switching who's saying what you should write it on a new line. Also watch out for capitalization, use of punctuation and spelling as well. I don't have much to say about the plot since I'm not picky on it. Maybe you can take your time, and use spell check if available. _ PM you spelling mistakes? Alright.