Oh, that was priceless, Terran. I loved it. It's very true to life how young kids will misunderstand directions and cause problems when they don't mean to. At least Splinter was able to see that they wanted to do something nice for him. Great job on this.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

Poor boys! Trying to make Splinter a cake... haha, awesome story!

“Shouldn’t we take the shell off first?” Raph asked.

Don looked up from the book. “It doesn’t say to.”

Whew, I'm not the only one who follows recipes so closely! xD This fic was so adorable! I love the logic behind all the actions. Well done! :)

*giggles* I could NOT stop laughing during this! It was just so adorable! *grins* This just put me in the best mood! I'm so glad you wrote this!

ME

This was adorable!

Oh, too funny! I could completely relate to the confusion over cooking instructions. The first cake I tried to make at the age of six called for egg whites. I added them to the batter while my mom's back was turned to do something else. The look on everyone's face when they got to the egg shells was priceless!

ROTFL!

This is such a cute story! Gotta love the chibi tales! It reminds me of me when I try to cook anything in the kitchen.

Just curious, how old are the guys in this story?

LOL! That was so funny! Poor Leo, he gets the brunt of the punishment! And Mikey, the ever optimistic! When's Father's Day, indeed!

this story was so cute and hilarious i loved it ..so what happens on father's day

i agree with splinter, the thought was good... really funny and cute story. good job1

Very nice! *clap clap*

*snickers uncontrolably* Poor Leo!*laughs even harder*

lol. I don't know if I should feel bad for Raph, Mikey, Don and Leo or for Splinter.

That story was so adorable. I hope that you write others like it.