   KeptinSight 5/23/12 . chapter 6Glad to see this updated, please don't let it be the end. |
| RemberingStars 5/23/12 . chapter 1 Hey, haven't read this story, but I have read most of the rest. I just wanted to mention something that I'm not sure anyone else has noticed. It's been ten years since you started writing fan fictions, on this website at least. Starting with your It's Just Allergies series (by the way if you wrote more Harley Quinn/Poison Ivy I wouldn't complain), to this, you have been an amazing writer. I just hope you continue to fan the flame of your writing. Hope to read more soon,
RememberingStars |
| polybi 5/7/12 . chapter 6 First, if you didn't notice, this is Candice's second appearence here...she was in ch.3 or 4 when there was speculation that SwanQueen was already in effect.
I sincerly hope this is NOT *THE* end. By introducing Mal and Candice into the action, a whole nice new can of worms have been opened, and I, for one, would love to see what turns out! |
| GothicPheonix 5/7/12 . chapter 6 When you said "Mal" I knew right away...Maleficent. And Candace being the Witch..hmm, interesting XD Great job on this chapter, I can't wait to read more. |
| Thantos1 5/7/12 . chapter 6 Great Update can't wait to see how it all plays out |
| Blue 5/6/12 . chapter 5 Take Regina to the appointment with you silly Emma! I'm really enjoying the story. Hope to see more soon. |
| bhut 5/6/12 . chapter 6 Nice update after a long while. I'm pleased to see that Emma and Regina hadn't killed each other yet (though the week isn't over either). Mr. Gold is, of course, evil, and is constantly on the move (like a very old, somewhat physicaly infirm, shark). Thanks for the update too, it's been a while and I'm really enjoying this story. |
| rampantjake 5/6/12 . chapter 6 wow, an incredible story! |
| LOCISVU 5/6/12 . chapter 6 Hatesex!I can only it's between Emma & ! |
| Angelsheart85 5/6/12 . chapter 6 mmmmmmmmmmm nice chapter B-) |
| Ravenclaw992 5/6/12 . chapter 6 Huh...they do work good together. Go figure.
I wonder what Gold is planning? Dun, dun, dun! You have everyone in perfect character, by the way. It's very good.
Hmmm...would Mallory be Maleficent by any chance? |
| miluvrox 5/6/12 . chapter 6 I think that you're making Regina too confident about Mr. Gold. She knows who he really is and she knows that Rumpelstilskin is extremely powerful and smart so she would know not to underestimate him so easily. |
| Anon 5/3/12 . chapter 5 Really hope you continue; I'm madly in love with this story. Your writing is superb, as always. :) |
| KeptinSight 4/22/12 . chapter 5 Please continue this story, I really enjoy it. |
| morshon 4/20/12 . chapter 5 Dont' leave me hanging! please continue this story! |
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