I died a little bit inside.
It was perfect, and I cried.
I love you, man. xD

Reyna had a hard impact

oops i forgot to put u kinda made reyna depressing at least u didnt make her commit suicide srry!

first off im a jasper shipper n no im not gonna complain bout how described piper but reyna. first off u make her seem like shes infatuared with jason secondly whoah where did the dreams come from n wats with the crying i get it if it was during the war or wen he got kidnapped or wen hes on a quest seriousely thirdly this is not a flame but CC and last but most important (not to u but to other authers out there) can piper n reyna get along in some of ur stories n plz read squirrelLOVA's story 'Dear Fanfiction' chapter 19 no im not squirrelLOVA im the guest that suggested that story n i dont have an account :'( k thnx for reading this if u did n srry if i wasted ur oh so precious time

ITISBEAUTIFUL Keep writing!

That was very depressing! Your descriptions of piper were very good, it sounded exactly how reyna would describe her. All in all an awesome fic!

StarrySea

Love it! :)

very good story!