crazy weird but very funny i like it

Ah,if only we can all get rid of our consciences so easily,but I misplaced my nine with extreme violence and pain,always good for a laugh.A few minor typos,but nothing to see more,and remind me never to mess with anyone named Bob.

Um, interesting one there lunar... but funny. why do you torture poor takeru? and who is little C? maybe i'm just a little crazy. oh well, back to the world of my strange fic...

Ooo! You updated! :-D (Er, don't let the fact that you actually told me that you did throw you!) Heehee, I like the opening statement, nice touch to a parody story ;-) Heh, it takes a good writer to write so poorly! Although there are a few who have been naturally blessed in that departmen Thank god you're not one of them! LOL for 'Bob.' Italian Disco? Heehee, I'm guessing I didn't misread that :-P I like the personality switcher :-) It's an interesting touch. I also like the bouncers at an arcade, must be a pretty high class place! :-P Heh, all in all a fun chapter! Keep writing, because you know I'll keep reading :-D

well... that was...interesting...the 1st chapter was kinda funny but the second chapter was well...not... but continue if u feel the need

Dude... this is pretty f'd up right here. You know, I don't even care, because you had me in stitches with that eyebrow wigglin' thing. I apologize about seemingly ducking out of reviewing one of your stories, especially after the kind words you so freely bestow upon my little bits o'bilge.

*Realizes he hasn't watched Digimon since they became all craptastic with that Ken guy.*

But that's okay. You're using the cast I at least remember in this story, which makes it all the more easy to understand/get the jokes/know who the fuck you're talking about. In closing, I like this story.

*Fades back into the shadows and waits for more eyebrow wigglin' from TK ala Piston Honda from Mike Tyson's Punchout.*

okay, that was funni, but what the hell is going on here, orange diving suit? lol, any way kee up da good work

Wow,when you want someone gone,they better stay gone huh? ,getting better,but like Caitiy said,too is this the calm before the storm?(borrows Cheezy Music)Looking forward to the next chapter

LOL! Just as fun as the first chapter! I can see that you're going to make some enemies with the idea of getting back at all the fic writers out ther That might not make you any new friends ;-) Heehee, the name slip is great! Heehee I really like the conscience bit! Too many fic writers seem to misplace their The idea of having the conscience in the mix as a character is good, I'm looking forward to seeing how effective he will b Not very is my guess :-D Again my only complaint is the lengt Too short! Lunarian must write more! Please? O:-)

Real Review:The style was funny,but truthfully it's just too wierd when the intro is longer then actual thing the story really needs is a few more jokes and then it'll be great.

Funny,but too short!Need more.

that is a very interesting... thing.

hahahahaha

TK THA PLAYA!

Heh, I see you've decided to go through with it and write the story. That was fast! Once again you've got some wonderful descriptions going on there, well at least for the first more serious (Sorta, I guess?) part. I'm looking forward to seeing how you manage to get all the Fanfiction no-nos in there :-) Should make for a fun and interesting read to say the least! "A deep sea diving suit in the color vivid tangerine," seems a bit random, but then again that's probably part of the point. My one complaint is that its too short! :-P Keep writing I’ll be looking for more chapters!