|Reviews for Within These Four Walls|
| berutei 2/21/13 . chapter 6
I really enjoyed your jobs! XD
(Hmm... I'm sorry about my poor English.)
| Waruitenshi 2/20/13 . chapter 6
LOL! Dr. Hugo Strange! I'd know that crazy jerk anywhere! XD Never been very fond of him... But I DO so love Jervis and Jonathan! X3 This chapter was funny and somewhat cute! I like how Jervis refers to Jonathan as his March Hare!
I excitedly await your next brilliant chapter! LoL I'd log in but I did and FF is being glitchy! XD
| Mystrothedefender 2/20/13 . chapter 6
It IS a rubber!
I love how you make Jervis drift off, he's so adorable!
| Waruitenshi 2/19/13 . chapter 5
LoL I love how Jonathan is quicker to panic than he believes he is. XD Also Jervis is always so sweet and awesome! X3 Love it and can't wait to read more! Keep up the awesomeness please!
| Waruitenshi 2/19/13 . chapter 4
I actually liked this chapter. It was cute and comical and was a pretty good way for Jonathan to start understanding his feelings a little. And I believe in love at first sight so I understand what you meant. It was very clear in my mind. LoL And I can tell Jervis obviously has a thing for his darling March Hare too! X3
Don't change this chapter please! It's awesome the way it is! X3
| Waruitenshi 2/19/13 . chapter 3
LOL! Gotta love Jervis. XD It's the cute and quiet ones like him you gotta watch out for! And yes Jonathan IS an adorable March Hare! X3
Also, love the cake reference from "Long Halloween"! Heheheheheh!
| Waruitenshi 2/19/13 . chapter 2
LOL! It is pretty good so far. Jervis (when written well) always makes me laugh and smile, and so does Jonathan. XD
| Mystrothedefender 9/30/12 . chapter 5
They are all genius', and Hatter is so cute, taking care of his Jon ,, how dare Jon not like him! Admit it Jon- you like him really!
| Mystrothedefender 2/18/12 . chapter 4
Well, considereing this is the first story in this vein I've read (Jonathan/Jervis), I think it's fantastic. I suppose this is one of the situations where being dyslexic is actually helping me - as I'm actually able to read this rather well.
I liked the '3rd' chapter, the idea of Jonathan putting himself in wonderland is intriguing, and him not understanding what his own dreams mean or understanding what he's feeling, sounds like the sort of story I'd be interested in. I'm enjoying it so far, can't wait for more.
| Major-Stardust 2/3/12 . chapter 4
Awesome update. I like the idea of Johnny's subconscious having to show him what he's really feeling.
And yay for J/J kissing! Even if it's only a dream.
| Major-Stardust 2/2/12 . chapter 3
This is great. I love this pairing and there's lots of promise on this story. I hope you continue. And for a dyslexic whose first language isn't English, you're doing remarkably well. Not very many mistakes, and those that there are don't make it hard to read like some people's mistakes do.
| lamp 1/21/12 . chapter 2
Thank you so much for writing something with these two, there really isn't enough Scarecrow/Hatter. Your grammar may even get better while writing this. Update soon if you can. A paragraph a day keeps the writer's block away. )
| crowscrow 1/18/12 . chapter 2
I love it! Thank you for writing about these two, there isn't enough! And if you are dyslexic and English is your second language you did a stand up job, seriously. A few of my friends are dyslexic and I know how tough it can be to write and read.
I like how you went into depth with the class structuring at Arkham. I've always really liked that aspect of the comics and show, it always made think of a school or something, lol. :)
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