Oh my, this whole piece was just...wow. You realize I want more of it, right? *laugh* So much wide open space for this story - what an awesome piece, thank you so much! Poor Dean, I'd offer to rub his tummy better but he's probably a little gun-shy about having it touched after this. 3

Oooh, first time I read this, I thought 'she' had killed Dean, then I read it again and thought it was a vision or some kind of hallucination.

I like the mysterious dreamy caste you've given this, and love the descriptives. Very, very nice.

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I love the way Dean's injury isn't immediately apparent, and I hooted at how 'baby looking damn fine in the moonlight' was way up there on his list of priorities, over and above the stab wound in his side!

Great job, well done x

Fugly ganked…check

Little brother safe…check

Impala looking damn fine in the moonlight…check.

Love the check list Chick - as usual "how am I" way down on Dean's list of priorities

Viv

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Wow, mysterious and fascinating, every time I read it I interpret it a little differently

Great ficlet!

Love this - loved how wound doesn't even make his top three!

LOVE. IT.! Awesome, awesome... AWESOME! :D

Ooooooo... I like, I like! Awesome!

Aaaaaaah! Dean! Loved the mystery in this. Who is she? What's happening? I love filling in the blanks!

Wow, amazing imagery. Two terrific drabbles, great job :)

This is a truely alarming fiction. We need more so we'll know Dean will be ok.

Whoa!

Good one!