This was an absolute joy to read. The chapters were short and crisp, refreshing and endearing. Thank you for writing.

LOVED IT!

Inspired! Thank you.

Love.

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Great story! Read through the entire thing in one go and I truly enjoyed it. Also, big props to you for sticking by such a challenge and finishing it in a satisfying way!

what a wonderful piece of work here.! I truely enjoyed it ! very artisticly done!

My, where even to begin...?

This story was amazing. You put more power in one hundred little words than most can in one thousand. I give you great respect for being able to pull that off. It's a difficult style, and you used it magnificently.

And you even managed to create a solid plotline! I had trouble following it for a bit, but it all pulled together in the end.

Charactirization and description were both wonderful. I found myself falling in love with both fluffy Jareth and dark Jareth. He was perfect.

But this was a lovely story, and you should be very proud of it. I'm honored to have read it... I sincerely hope you have a good day today and forevermore 3

So heartbroken.. You have delivered a powerful blow, cruel genius.

I'm so desperate to know how this ends

It hurts my heart to see Jareth's turn of character, but I look forward to the next plot twist..

My emotions are everywhere... What is Jareth thinking? The writing is giving me chills, but I fear there is trickery at work.

Plot twist! But oh, the irony. Released into his own labyrinth in search of the one to defeat it.

This story has me enchanted. Your writing is lovely

I think the Battleship chapter was my favorite 3 I love the small, simple moments. This is just wonderful!