What? That is a seriously bad ending. You basically told half a story and then said &*(# the other half.

Just wanted to let you know, if you still read these reviews, that I've been following this fic off and on for almost 6 years now. I'd consider it one of the classics of the Zelda section, perfect mix of everything I was looking for in a Zelda fic at the time. I still like it to this day, and its one of only a few stories I check every few months to see if its been updated. I've seen it mentioned similarly elsewhere on the site by others in different topics. People know your story, despite its age. Kinda like a hidden gem.

I hope you are doing well and that someday soon you'll let us know how things are going, not just with the story, but with yourself as well.

This is the BEST fanfic I have ever read. It takes place in my favorite Zelda time (i.e. post/during Majora's Mask), and it's amazingly well written. The humor is fantastic, your descriptions of Link are even better, and I keep coming back to both his Wolfos killing skills and his Ocarina-playing.

Is there ANY way that you could possibly continue this? There are way too many unanswered questions!

You're awesome. This story is awesome. Basically, I'm submerged in awesome as I read this.

I will just have to hope that it continues somehow.

This is a very good story, which though has many praiseworthy qualities, i have appreciated most of all for its humor. This story is just fun, in my opinion, and even my history with your story is fun. I first found it when it had six chapters, read a bit into it, and then forgot its name when i returned to finish. I found it again sometime later, lost it, and then grieved for a very long time. Now, i have found it, added it to my favorites, and ill be damned if it gets out of my sights again!
I cannot think of any critiques for you, but i would also like to add that i am very happy how Fairy oriented this story is. My favorite of all things zelda and fanfictional is that wonderful, unfathomable mystery of what happens to Link after Majoras Mask, especially concerning his search for Navi. My interest will eventually lead me to write my own story on the subject, but until then i'll spend my time leaping for joy every time i find another authors story that that has delved into that very same mystery. Yes, you heard me quite right, your story makes me leap.
So, i have enjoyed this story a great deal, and look forward to following this plot word for word into an interesting and bloody war, the way to which is paved with fun, excitement, fairies, humor, and glorious suspense. Write on, wonderful author, and i shall read!

Thank you for serving our country.This was a great action chapter.Never was there a greater enemy than that cloud,I'm sure.
You wrote Saria wonderfully.That entire scene was so great.Great job.
Navi blushed,Malon accepted and both Zelda and Ruto are having dreams.Link you dog!

A great chapter,not much to say.
Zelda owns polite manipulation.
Paige in the Fairy Woods was a frightening scene.
Mido...the bastard!
Talon didn't care,WTF!
She accepted the new feeling.NICE.
Two rupees! Half her allowance! Priceless.
Trouble from Termina to come!
Honestly,this was a chapter that put in a lot of questions and promises to answer them in the best way.Great Job!

HA! The perfect cliffhanger!MALON!I can't believe you didn't follow up on the chapter one cliffhanger immediately. That was incredibly rude.Anyway,the look in on Termina was enlightening and the continued events of the nobles was very entertaining.Zaphyeer speaks-Hylian(Terminian),and nobody knew!
The execution of Link's show of heroism wasn't as grand as I thought-Jumps in front of sword and shears it with his own-but still praise worthy.The best part of that scene was collective assualt on Mr.Rami by his wife,Ms.Garish and the orphans;he doesn't qualify as human being anymore.Malon's interrogation is sure to be priceless-what ten-year old antics aren't-and a meeting with the sovereigns means Gerudo!Great Job!
+A mysterious task Navi seems ashamed over?-the intrigue!

In my opinion Zelda fanfiction as whole is difficult to write well, but the series has so much to be inspired about that it finds itself being written just the same.Usually,very badly. That statement really has no meaning concerning this work because it was brilliant! The timeline, if existent,plays to Link having his memories after OoT and using that knowledge to leave the forest and go to Termina,that adventure done with there are a thousand possiblities until Wind Waker. His return to Hyrule and the life he leads as he grows is always best for artistic license and creative reign.Unlike many other stories you use this blessing well. Your Link is great. Totally independent-save for Navi-at such a young age,casual and relaxed and he doesn't speak with an overly formal lexicon that doesn't belong to a child of the forest and later adventuring mercenary type hero. You filled in the basics of how he's spent his knew life so far without unnecesary detail and created a feeling of familarity and even comfort with his routine in a single chapter.Malon seems to be a spitfire and that how it should be.That you started the story with her and Epona plays to my preference.
To the story itself:I love the mixing of Termina and Hyrule through actual use of the characters being from there.Too many story simply borrow the moves of the races and some background(not altogether a bad thing,but I tend to see them as distinct to each place) and it doesn't mesh as smoothly as it could.The responses by each noble was hilarious through their mutual misunderstanding and it's bound to add humor at the actual confrontation,if it happens.Ms.Garish and the orphans are wonderful in their station-much like Saria and the Kokiri children. Mr.&Mrs.Rami difference in the preference of qualities in a son make them realistic as a couple when they disagree.The entire scene with Mrs.Rami and Link playing music was great,it really nailed down her growing love for the fairy boy.The manipulations of a well-meaning,caring and busybody Mrs.Rami were too on the spot.This is a lot of praise for single chapter of significant length, let alone the first,but it's all well deserved and aside from an at this time unimaginable atrocity I find plenty more to compliment.Great Job!
+Malon!
+“I only like you, Navi,” Link paused his playing long enough to say. That always quieted Navi. Indeed, the blushing little fairy said not another word until they reached the outer gates of the town of Hyrule, too embarrassed to talk.*EPIC WIN* It too true!And a fair start!

Characters are always changing allegiances, relationships, and identities, and that always gives the story a little more excitement. It simply draws me in, and keeps me reading for hours, while my pile of homework lays neglected.
On the other hand, the constant shifts in the original characters' names and identities does create a bit of a confusion, but, after reading a bit, you usually catch on to what's going on.
As a side note, the original characters are really nicely developed. They aren't artificial at all--they all have their own morals, values, and ethics they keep to.
All in all, a really nice story. Hopefully, I'll be able to remember the name when you do update--I've got a pretty bad memory.

Take all the time you need, fics like this don't come around every day, and they're worth the wait.

As for Naruto... The battle against the abomination known as Yaoi is a never-ending one. I wish you luck should you take up the cause, you'll need it.

I loved this chapter!

I wonder what Aenai's problem is? Does she not like this god that is returning to Termina?

I hope you are all right. Sorry to hear you were getting shot at.

I hope you update Ascension soon, I want to see what happens next!

Sincerely,
Nanashi

I think I almost passed out when I saw the update. I was actually just going to send you a message just to tell you that I still reread your stories for their awsomeness. Thank you so much for updating. Sorry to hear about the getting shot thing. I know you got your own life but it's rare to see great work like this. I can't help but ask if Fierce Deity Link will make an appearance. I have always felt that that was lInk's most bad-ass form

^^ Interesting...
Well I'm eagerly awaiting your update on this story...but I can wait a long, long time (so hopefully you don't feel rushed). Good job!
~Peeka-chan

awesome.. freaking awesome. i love you!don't vanish on us again!