I'm curious how Malon came to reflect one of the goddesses. And would Ruto be the third, then?

I'm guessing Navi will need to be very careful to not give the impression of standing between Faylinn and Link.

It seems Jylene is becoming suspicious about who the real Hero of Time might be. And I wonder if Faron's going to develop a sudden case of death by misunderstanding (and a little bottle of poison).

This is an interesting story, with lots of parallel threads. I will subscribe, and hope you feel inclined to continue it.

So Narcissa is a Great Fairy named Faylinn. This threw me a bit, since she earlier cut off use of a name starting with M.

I wonder what is Faylinn's motive. It seems she isn't too happy with Navi being close to Link. I guess I'll be upset in two chapters, when I run out of them.

I absolutely love this story. It really stands out for its unique plot and excellent characterization. I'm particularly impressed by how you are able to weave both actual and original characters together without any of them seeming strange or out of place. I hope you're able to continue it some day.

This story just moves too slow for it to hold my interest..

omg these two OCs you have trying to adopt Link are really fucking annoying. Are they just a convenient plot device to step in to stop Link from revealing himself? Do they serve any other purpose? What useless characters...I just skim through their sections.

...Wow!

This is perhaps one of the best stories I've read. It has so much going on, but it's not confusing. It's more like... fascinating! ...Okay, that's an odd way to describe it, I know. But I was totally hooked while reading this. There are so many amazing plot twists and little bits of foreshadowing! ...I didn't start paying attention to them until later, though. I seriously didn't see Ivani's true identity coming. And when you revealed it so casually, I laughed at myself. You left so many hints that it's pretty obvious. Even the NAMES are similar!

I really hope you can update soon - it's been a year, but I was SO sad when I ran out of chapters, haha.

THIS WAS THE MOST AMAZYING CHAPTER I HAVE EVER READ

and there are 9 more chapters TT

but it's 10:27 and i have school tomorrow TT

uwa i wanna keep on reading...

Very interesting story so far! I'm really curious to see where this all goes :)

So...are the Goddesses evil or is the "Warrior God"(whos identity is obvious) evil? I'm confused.:(

Really great story, hope you can update!

Alot happened this chapter. Malon has the triforce of power? And Paige is kidnapping Saria? Keep up the great work and update again soon!

I really hope you update soon! XD

This is AWESOME.

Glad to see you writing again. Keep it up! Don't worry too much about the grammer, etc. It hasn't gotten in the way of the story.

Great to hear that you are back! Always excited when new chapters of this story comes out. Hope to hear more from you. Great work as usual

I just thought of something, is Faylinn also Tatl?