You made me cry... You write wonderfully. Please write next chapter. Cant wait to read .

Love this story! Keep up the good work!

AHHH! CRYING. THE END... WOW. UPDATE ASAP.

Sweet chapter. Update soon!

I'm dead. I've just finished chapter thirteen, and I absolutely cannot wait until more it out. I'm literally sitting here awestruck, imagining that a new chapter will just pop up when I want it to. Okay. You are absolutely wonderful. I cannot stress enough about how delightful this is. Have a beautiful night.

When is the next update?

Love the fic! Can't wait till the next chapter! Update soon!

I stumbled across this and am really enjoying it. James and Lily are so irresistably cute. Aside from some grammatical mistakes and misspellings, your writing is very descriptive. Hope you will continue and complete this story.

AWESOME!just lovin it...when r u uploading next chapter?

Aww! I loved the end of the chapter! Now when is Lily finally going to spit out the truth to James? I can't blame her for wanting to keep it to herself, but I have a major soft spot for James's sensitive moments. Overall I loved the chapter, so please update soon!

Oh my wizard goodness. I adore this. Like, so much. I was in the mood for some really good, cute (more like adorable!) Lily/James fanfiction, and that's what you delivered! Even more-so! IT'S SO FREAKIN CUTE! I'd read it again, but it's 4 in the morning. Thanks alot bro! Haha, oh well, this story is definitely worth it!

Siriusly! - (See what I did there?) Siriusly, I love the Maurauder/Lily scenes! They're the best!

I actually felt scared during the part with Amos,

Sad during Lily's fight with Severus (Glad you brought him in)

And oh my Rowling, that kissing part in the corridor during the prank! YUM

Since I read this in one sitting, I don't remember if it's complete or not. I'm going to assume not, because I want more!

So, if not, are you going to include Lily's friendship with Lupin? Remus said to Harry that Lily could see the beauty in people even when they had difficulty seeing it in themselves. I'll infer he meant himself and that Lily really helped him accept himself and his condition. I hope you include it!

But those dreams about Harry make me so sad D':

Fantastic job!

It was really wonderful. Please write up soon. All the chapters were really touchy and made me cry. Thank you

Awwwww

Good

Finally!