|Reviews for Concrete Angel|
| Boo On You 7/27/12 . chapter 1
What's poppin WBQ? I like what you did with your name actually, I should do the same combination thing with my own name. From now on the world will know me as... BOY! Wait a minute, I am male but not a boy so that wouldn't work. Damn it to hell!
(Pouts) It's not fair! WBQ gets an awesome name and when I try it it's stupid! (Pouts)
Sorry there WBQ, I had a wee tantrum there. If anything I hope it brought a smile to your face. If you think I'm crazy, well, I can assura you you're not alone.
ANYWAY, on to my actual review, I get sidetracted quite easily. Okay, here's the lowdown...I am a part of a group called "Wow That Sucked" but I am honestly not reviewing on their behalf. Because frankly, your story here (or songfic really) didn't suck. It's just habit to sign off this way (you'll see what I mean after you finish reading the words I'm currently typing - well, not so current by the time you actually read it - damn my attention span is horrid lately - think I should talk to my doctor about that? - maybe I could tell him about how gassy I've been lately - Oh crap, I'm doing it again - this is turning out to be a really long quote in parenthesis huh? - I should probably stop here and put the ) but now I don't want to - Now I want to see how far I can really go - you don't mind do you? - I sure hope not - I'm just really random at times - and I liked your story (songfic) - wow look at that a parenthesis inside a parenthesis - Psh, I'm just that badass - Did you know that on my real profile I am actually an accomplished author? - Yep got like four stories that are crazy popular in the world of Naruto - I love Naruto - It's my favorite manga like ever - but you see the group I'm apart of agreed to be anonymous so - yeah - I created Boo On You as my alias - the group's actually not as bad as some might think - all we want to do is help other authors out there to improve - do you think that's a good idea - popular authors coming together to help out others in an anonymous slash funny slash crazy way? - it sounded cool when So-Called invited me and she's like way cooler than me - hey you know what? - since you can't respond to this review - you know, since it's like totally anonymous and all - you could address me in your next update! - Or not, whatever WBQ, it's cool - maybe my crazy will totally inspire you - Sasuke's bat crap crazy don't you think? - maybe I'm really sasuke - i do have a bastard older brother - and you know what - my best friend is a blonde idiot! - Holy Batman! - I'm freaking Sasuke! - You know what though WBQ? - I think I always knew I was an Uchiha - I'm prideful as hell - and my hair is black and it also looks like the ass end of a duck - I didnt style that way on purpose either it's all natural - when i talk to my doctor I'll have to remember to have my name changed in their records - Oh wait! - So I wouldn't be BOY then because my name isn't really Boo On You! - It would be SU for Sasuke Uchiha! - Then I could play off of that and tell people my name is really SUCK! - How freaking awesome is that WBQ! - I'm so pumped! I'm so pumped that my - gasp! - my sharingan JUST ACTIVATED! - but wait - its only in one eye - what the hell is happening to me WBQ! - ah! - help! - pant - pant - pant - pant - WBQ OMG the most amazing thing just happened - seriously this is the coolest thing like EVER - I have the sharingan in my right eye but the BYAKUGAN in my left eye - it's trippy as all hell! - I'm like a ninja - no - better yet - like a super ninja - no - like a super duper ninja! - it's like Neji and Sasuke had a baby and named it SUCK! - but don't forget that my hair looks like a duck - so i could go by SUCK DUCK! - oh oh oh! - if I put it all together I'd be SUCK DUCK BOY! - No, that's not nearly as cool as just SUCK DUCK - Hmm, maybe I should just stick with Boo On You - what do you think I should do WBQ? - this is a big life changing decision - I mean, I'm going to have my doctor change their records and everything! - I'm thinking about stopping my parenthesis quote here - All that naming business wore me out) Phew! Finally!
Okay I officially just cracked myself up. I'm really sorry that my total crazy escaped during this review. If you want, you totally have my permission to share my review with all your friends and get a good laugh out of it. It's what I would do anyway!
REVIEW TIME! Are you ready for my awesome review powers WBQ? First off, I do like the song you chose so that earns you some points in my favor. The fact that the song will be stuck in my head for days on end jumbles up my thoughts and now I can't finish this review because I'm tired and am getting bored. I like the story, keep up the good work, and please, please, please don't take anything regarding the "Wow That Sucked" group seriously. Well, it should be taken seriously, but in relation to this review it shouldn't be.
Fun Fact: The worst author on this site is Written-Sin. (I should talk to So-Called about having this part added into our Disclaimer)
Because SUCK DUCK SAID SO!
Boo On You is part of a collective group called "Wow That Sucked" composed of more intelligent authors than the one of this so-called fanfiction. If you have received this message on one of your so-called stories then you will know how putrid your so-called writing/development skills are.
*So-Called* - Group Initiater
Boo On You
Are You A Preteen?
Give Up Now
Disclaimer/Advice: In order to stop receiving these messages the terrible author of this fanfiction has the ability to turn off anonymous reviews in their account settings. We really don't care if you are offended.
| sprinklesomesalt 1/16/12 . chapter 1
SASGAY EMO IS SOOOO FUNNY! pls update...i have no joy in life besides reading fanfics
| Little-bad-Angel 1/16/12 . chapter 1
i love the song...and i think it's a great idea to write a ff to that song...
though (no offence!) the song is about the child being strong for herself, and sakura is afraid of her father...but i can understand that sakura is afraid...i mean who wouldn't be!
i really liked the scene on the playgrounds!
Awesome chapter/start...can't wait for the next one...hope u update soon!