Enjoyed reading this- lively dialogue and some striking descriptions. I did notice occasionally you dropped punctuation marks, like here: '"Seriously, you're weird" Ginny said.' Should be '"Seriously, you're weird," Ginny said.

Good work x

It's a quick read and yet it's very sweet. I noticed that you tried to copy Keith's line from Oliver, and it made me think, what if Oliver was really the one who said that? Haha, you got me going there! Great writing!

This was such a cute one shot! Loved the last line!

That was really cute! I love Ginny and Oliver :)

That was really adorable! I especially loved the ending, "I think we're kind of something". Keep writing!