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Reviews For: Dear Mom. . .

Dazy Oswald
2004-01-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseI think it's dorky for Ani to write a letter to his mom. He sounds like a loser! I think you should leave Star Wars letters to George Lucas. It wasn't that bad of a letter but being that I'm a huge fan of that extremely hot Hayden, I hate to see him made fun of. I'd like to read more. Just be careful. He is a Jedi!
lighted eagle
2002-07-18
ch 1,
abusecute....stay tru too charecters, like it how it briefly touched the ob-ani relationship...good job
The Chair Faerie
2002-06-04
ch 1,
abuseThat was great, it really fit the character from what I got from the movie. Sequel maybe?
Dreamboat Kicks
2002-05-31
ch 1,
abuseYay! Quite good, although a bit short. I especially liked the line where Anakin said he didn't know whether he really was a Jedi. I think you hit the nail on the head, character-wise right there
me
2002-05-26
ch 1, anon.
abusenot bad!
Brooke
2002-05-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseawww That was absolutley great.
celera
2002-05-13
ch 1,
abuseNice, stays true to the characters
thelovemutt
2002-05-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was good.
andrea
2002-05-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseawww.That was so cute. great job
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