I think it's dorky for Ani to write a letter to his mom. He sounds like a loser! I think you should leave Star Wars letters to George Lucas. It wasn't that bad of a letter but being that I'm a huge fan of that extremely hot Hayden, I hate to see him made fun of. I'd like to read more. Just be careful. He is a Jedi!

cute...stay tru too charecters, like it how it briefly touched the ob-ani relationship...good job

That was great, it really fit the character from what I got from the movie. Sequel maybe?

Yay! Quite good, although a bit short. I especially liked the line where Anakin said he didn't know whether he really was a Jedi. I think you hit the nail on the head, character-wise right there

not bad!

awww That was absolutley great.

Nice, stays true to the characters

That was good.

was so cute. great job