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| Dazy Oswald 2004-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think it's dorky for Ani to write a letter to his mom. He sounds like a loser! I think you should leave Star Wars letters to George Lucas. It wasn't that bad of a letter but being that I'm a huge fan of that extremely hot Hayden, I hate to see him made fun of. I'd like to read more. Just be careful. He is a Jedi! |
| lighted eagle 2002-07-18 ch 1, | abusecute....stay tru too charecters, like it how it briefly touched the ob-ani relationship...good job |
| The Chair Faerie 2002-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was great, it really fit the character from what I got from the movie. Sequel maybe? |
| Dreamboat Kicks 2002-05-31 ch 1, | abuseYay! Quite good, although a bit short. I especially liked the line where Anakin said he didn't know whether he really was a Jedi. I think you hit the nail on the head, character-wise right there |
| me 2002-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abusenot bad! |
| Brooke 2002-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseawww That was absolutley great. |
| celera 2002-05-13 ch 1, | abuseNice, stays true to the characters |
| thelovemutt 2002-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was good. |
| andrea 2002-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseawww.That was so cute. great job |