This Is really awesome! This is probably one of the best marauder stories I've ever read. Please continue!

This looks really epic and I started to read it before I realized that I don't know this fandom. This sucks, I was all excited because of how long I would have entertainment. :( Keep writing; you have mad skills!

This is good! Write some more. I'd be interested to see how you think Peter started going bad. Also, if you plan to do anything after school, I've always wondered why Sirius and Remus end up distrusting each other. Really, write some more (I love Torchwood too, but you must have finished all of it by now. Have you watched DW? At least the ones with Jack in them?).

Fantastic story so far. Just about to go and read the rest of it. I like your take on Peter especially. One minor point - didn't they find out in the third year and then take two years to become animagi? That's how I remember it, anyway.

What about them leavina an anonymous love letter for the new DADA teacher, or painting rainbow coloured stripes all over Snape, unremoveable, of course.

please, please, please, ppllleeeaaassseee write the next chapter!

mmm I love it c:

great addition, love everyone's thoughts :D can't wait for more!

I liked how you could tell who wrote each rule, and how well it showed their personalities. Don't worry about not updating. I think it's been over a month since I last updated. I just have zero inspiration. I don't know what you should do for future chapters, because I'm absaloutely useless most of the time with plot. I'm better at character developement and such. Anywho, good chapter! Happy writing! :)

You know what I noticed? That Peter wrote the word betray, it's almost like a sign. Or I over think things. Yeah, probaly the last one.

Do you ever want to just give your characters a hug? Cause I sure do! I love Remus sosososososooo much. I think it makes my boyfriend jealous :S

I love this story. You've captured the younger years of the Marauders beautifully and realistically. I like that Peter is actually part of the group and not just the whipping boy that most stories make him out to be. I can't wait for the nex chapter. :)

I really like the Marauder's code. I have to do something like this with my friends...

love your writing please continue

Nice to see that James Potter has a good relationship with his elders.

Poor boys

for Peter because he is feeling like hes the last man on earth and not being aloud to read the Daily Profit or listen to the news

For Remus because of his transformations

For Sirius because he has lost his brother to Slytherin and is like a traitor to his family name

For James for losing his cousin