| Reviews for Breaking Peace |
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pinkpolkadots71 5/27/13 . chapter 1Wonderful start! Please update soon |
CreatedInFyre7 5/14/13 . chapter 1I would very much like to see where this is going. I am a huge fan of AU and time-travel in Naruto, mostly because I find it very sad that Naruto never got to know his parents :(. Anywho, update soon please! |
FE96jAFFAR 5/8/13 . chapter 1Can't wait to see how this plays out! Looking forward to that second chapter. |
lotrhpfan1234 4/16/13 . chapter 1I absolutely adore time travel fics, and i really hope you plan to continue this one since it seems really interesting |
Vaughn Tyler 4/9/13 . chapter 1very nice |
Persefone88 4/1/13 . chapter 1You have set up a solid and workable background for Naruto's timetravel. A few well thought out/orginal points I liked: - Kushina looked the scrools so that Naruto could not access them until he was grown up and more responsible. Leaving a kid with dangerous seals would NOT have been a good ideé. - Naruto testing the seal for shorter periods before hand and not just jumping stright into the distant past. - Naruto receving advise from Shikamaru instead of doing the whole time travel thing completly on his own. - The change with the timetravel beeing well thought out and not a last ditch effort in a losing war or a freak accident. - The United Shinobi Nations was a very nich touch. Good luck with the writing. Hope a new chapter shows up soon : ) |
somedayisours 3/3/13 . chapter 1I love it you have a great amount of detail and its not forced sounding update soon |
war sage 2/26/13 . chapter 1good start |
ivyknightfire 2/2/13 . chapter 1Please update soon this looks like it could b rlly good. :) Also could u maybe save Tsunade's brother and fiancé and even prevent orochimaru from going bad, cuz I think it'd b interesting to see the sannin get along. :) |
vantweet 1/22/13 . chapter 1I can't wait for the next chapter! i like how you portray naruto, both the happy attitude, and his matured Hokageview. |
Silver Flyer 12/9/12 . chapter 1Great so far. I have no complaints. Post again soon. ;) |
ougley 12/9/12 . chapter 1thank you :) are you going to continue this story? |
Guest 11/1/12 . chapter 1 update please |
Middle-Earth fan 202101202 9/15/12 . chapter 1I love the first chapter! It's really cool! Please update soon |
KusajishiFukutaicho 9/3/12 . chapter 1Ooooooh I love reading fics where Naruto goes back to Minato's time! (Am itching to try writing one ) Nice fic!(; |