 marble eyes 1/17/12 . chapter 2I was going to reply to your lovely PM, but decided to review this chapter that I didn't notice first time around :) I love so many elements of your second chapter; John thinking he'd going mad and is completely imagining Sherlock there, John getting a sly dig in at Mycroft and how sad it is John's kept all Sherlock's stuff. My only niggle is Sherlock was forgiven too easily and that John didn't tell him to shove his request of a take away right up his... but in my mind John is beating the hell out of him and making his life hell for many years to come ;)I'm half curious if series three will have a lot of dark John jokes in which he's always going 'well at least I didn't pretend I was dead for three years.' Good second chapter :) |