This is hilarious ! I really love it!

lmao. i can just imagine all the trouble those two will give each other!

I can see why its bugging you, a neat slices of life beyound the books.

I think this is a good depiction of what would happen. You portayed all canonical charactors perfectly. Especially Aly, because she's hard to get right.

This is pretty nice. The letter is a nice touch.

this is going to be interesting

! Lmao. I loved it! Thank you! Hilarious. You can just imagine the games those two will play now she has an entire kingdom at her disposal as well! Hehehhee

I love it! Wouldn't you like to write a sequel to that? Their spy-game could be really fun, if there is not a rebellion with lots of dead people in the way. pretty please!

Very nice! I was thoroughly amused :D

Ha ha ha ha ha!

Loved it! I always wanted to know what Aly would do to her father's spies.

You've got the characters exactly right. Great fic!

I love this! I'd always wondered about it, but now I don't have to! Great story.

I read this the other day but was on my Kindle so I was having trouble logging in but I wanted to say that this is great! I love the way you have it so that they're waiting for midnight so that Aly doesn't break what she said to her Da.

Good job, I love it.