|Reviews for Jar Of Hearts|
| SmellyThePirate 5/24/12 . chapter 1
Ziva power! Love it!
| Livy 5/21/12 . chapter 1
Woohoo! Go Ziva! Ray was a lousy boyfriend the entire time they were together-good for her to finally move on! Love this song, love tthis story, love NCIS, love fanfic, love you...keep writing!
| ForeignMusicLyrics 1/16/12 . chapter 1
I do not think there are words to describe how I'm feeling right now:)
first things first- the story was absolutely beautiful. I had never really realized how perfectly this song fit Ray and Ziva. It describes their relationship perfectly! And the way you wrote this was just wonderful- I can't think of a better way to have written it. From your descriptive and figurative language to Ziva's thoughts and actions... It reflected perfectly on how she must have been feeling. The symbolism of the tree, and burying the box, was wonderfully navigated- I always loved symbolism. It had a great beginning middle, and end, and it was all-around wonderful- right down to the placement of the lyrics:)
And secondly... Oh my gosh I can't believe you dedicated it to me! Can you imagine my shock- I was just perusing through the Archive like I do every night and I stopped and did a double take! I was like OMFG that's my name! Why in the world... Oh my gosh she dedicated it to me?
I had been having a horrible night- I had to do my homework by the light of my iPod because my parents made me go to bed. I was stressed and aggravated- key word there being WAS. I'm not anymore! You just made my day!
You're so awesome:) from your writing to the way you made me feel indescribably special just now... All around awesome:) to think such a beautiful piece of literature was dedicated to MOI... :D :D :D
Can't stop smiling now:) thanks so much! It was wonderful:)