Wow!What a wonderful and exciting story.I cant wait to see what happens next.You really made me fall in love with Enishi and Misao as couple.Even though I like Aoshi/Misao stories, I've always hated the way he treated Misao always making her cry.I really hope you update this story soon.

I'am officially in love with Enishi!
And I'm so sorry about your website... I hope that won't bring you down since it would be a shame >.<
I hope to hear from you soon with an update!

Darnit... its not there anymore >.<

But wow.. their relationship really flows, its not rushed or pushed.

Wonderful job ^^

I had found this story and was greatly amused by it... i wish you can provide us with the succeeding chapters. That would be very much appreciated.

Awesome story. Thanks for sharing.

OMG! LOVE this story. I'm a total RK addict, but new to the world of fanfic. I stumbled across your story a couple of days ago and have simply consumed it. I can't wait for the next chapters to see how it ends.

Thank you for the wonderful story telling. I will definitely be checking out your other works.

thanks for updating your story... sob... sob... I couldn't believe it and yet I felt so relieved that you intend to continue writing this awesome piece... for a moment, I thought that you might have given up writing since you have already won the "RK fanfiction award" for romance alternate pairing category some years back... I have been faithfully following your story since many years ago and I haven't given up on constantly looking for new chapters updates every now and then... anyway, great story line and character development like always... ^_^

This particular chapter focuses on the inner turmoil of Misao, Aoshi, and Enishi... however, in my opinion, Enishi's inner musing of whether Misao is already carrying his child and also his show of his "not ready to father Misao's child" is very realistic and yet very out of place somehow... The encounter between them three has somehow, brings back the "maniac and evil" side of Enishi... How would you write this story should Misao is really carrying Enishi's child? I was just wondering if you intend to develop the story this way... Sorry if I'm wrong in my guessing.

Anyway, you made my day! I'm so happy that u updated. Keep up the good work and please update again soon... >_^

The only thing that really irks me is the lack of breaks whenever the scene is different. It becomes a bit confusing to me.

About the last scene. ...Whoah. Intense. It's a little strange though, because I actually -like- the fact that Misao broke off the kiss. It really must have been too much for her. Their relationship (if I can even call it that yet) must be too overwhelming and much to sudden...The action just seemed so...real.

Awesome storytelling. I just hope you can find the time to edit any formatting problems, like the lack of breaks I mentioned before. Anyway, good job. I hope this helps.

Hahahaha. Enishi thought he was rid of her didn't he? Nope! Reading your story makes me feel really giddy. I'm not sure if this is an appropriate reaction.

There are some grammar issues here and there (but then again, who doesn't have that problem?).
One thing I noticed was verb tense. The passages tend to shift between present and past, and though it is not all that noticeable, the paragraph may seem...cleaner if tense remains constant. Sorry, just a bit of constructive criticism.

It seems as if it has been a while since your last update (according to the story info) so I hope you can find the time and interest to finish this piece.

~IrisedLuna

What is your personal website? All I see is w.wandering-...

I really want to read that part since you said it was crucial to understanding Misao and Enishi's relationship.

Hello there. I just wanted to compliment this story's first chapter. It has a really intriguin hook. A journey of self discovery for the girl who had thought she knew what she wanted...hm. I like this idea that Misao is on her way to growing up and looking for not just what she pines for, but for someone/something that will be looking for her as well. Great job! And I also like the alternate pairing, but I feel for cold emotionless Aoshi. Oh, well

so yeh i found out about this awsome story by acident when i googled some stuff and then i relized hey i saw a picture for this story on deventart. i LOVE this fic! i'll definetly be adding it to my favorites list and i'm gonna add you as one of my favorite autors
Fightfuly yours
Dahlia

It was absolutely amazing! This story was planned out wonderfully, it kept to the characters and it's addicting! Can't wait for the next update! Don't rush! We respect you to take as much time as needed for the next chapter!

Enishi and Misao MUST be together, please.(sob). Aoshi must not ruin there lovey lovey. They are made for each other, and he wiil bot ruin it.

YES! THE NEXT CHAPTER IS FINALLY HERE! I LOVE YOU! i mean, i love you in an admiration for your wonderful work, and ability to write so beautifully. i almost cried when i saw the new chapter was posted... and i saw it at 2:00 am, but i stayed up until i finnished it! please continue writing whenever you can!!

--Deal-with-it ^.^

You have an absolutely amazing story here, Midori-san! I can't believe I didn't read it sooner! If I had the time I'd leave you a full review for every chapter, but May is finals for me so I need to get back to studying. Please update as soon as possible!

Your new fan,

-Lily