Dear: Midori Natari Himura

I really loved your story and although I didn't like the fake that Okina dies in this chapter, I would like to know how the story ends. I liked the fact that Misao is projected in this story as a strong woman who is capable of thinking for herself, not being in the need of a man to do it for her, these are the kind of female characters that I love in a story, but most of all I like the romance that is developed between Enishi and Misao and it seems a very mature relationship, but with it's funny and serious moments. Im really curious is Misao really pregnate with Enishi's child or not, it would be really cool if that happened so anyway I really, really loved your story so please continue your story, it was one of the best stories I have read of Enishi and Misao, although I would like that there were more published stories of Enishi and Misao in , but regrattably there aren't many stories of them, so please continue with your story.

Cordially,

Caramel Whipped

You set up your plot line for a suspenful and fascinating facedown between the three men. This would have been a great story if you had continued. It's always sad to see an abandoned story. This story deserved to live.

A concubine is financially-supported by one man, her patron- who has exclusive rights to her body. They often sign a contract outlining their relationship . She may live in her paton's house or he may set her up in her own home. This is a financial-sexual relationship; albeit an exclusive one. They are not just living together, in a modern sense.

Not a normal pairing I would have considered. But I like what you are doing with them.

Hello there!

I couldnt read the whole chapter and you said something about visiting your site. What is that? :S

Anyway, the story is great, I hope u update soon

I've never read such a story with such sophistication and yet with such "romantic passion" such as this. Very well thought out plot. You execute and deliver the scenes so well and beautifully - I ignore those so called typos that I may have missed because it was just too full of awesomeness. I've never thought about this pairing before; not until I've read this story and it has convinced me how wonderful and so fitting they'd be. I love your characterization, you give them such emotions and yet it doesn't ruin their characters at the same time.

Well, it's been about *counts* four years since you've posted this last chapter. I am still in high hopes that you will continue the story. Thank you for sharing your vision, your creativity in this story with us. :)

Wow!What a wonderful and exciting story.I cant wait to see what happens really made me fall in love with Enishi and Misao as though I like Aoshi/Misao stories, I've always hated the way he treated Misao always making her cry.I really hope you update this story soon.

I'am officially in love with Enishi!

And I'm so sorry about your website... I hope that won't bring you down since it would be a shame

I hope to hear from you soon with an update!

Darnit... its not there anymore

But wow.. their relationship really flows, its not rushed or pushed.

Wonderful job

I had found this story and was greatly amused by it... i wish you can provide us with the succeeding chapters. That would be very much appreciated.

Awesome story. Thanks for sharing.

OMG! LOVE this story. I'm a total RK addict, but new to the world of fanfic. I stumbled across your story a couple of days ago and have simply consumed it. I can't wait for the next chapters to see how it ends.

Thank you for the wonderful story telling. I will definitely be checking out your other works.

thanks for updating your story... sob... sob... I couldn't believe it and yet I felt so relieved that you intend to continue writing this awesome piece... for a moment, I thought that you might have given up writing since you have already won the "RK fanfiction award" for romance alternate pairing category some years back... I have been faithfully following your story since many years ago and I haven't given up on constantly looking for new chapters updates every now and then... anyway, great story line and character development like always... _

This particular chapter focuses on the inner turmoil of Misao, Aoshi, and Enishi... however, in my opinion, Enishi's inner musing of whether Misao is already carrying his child and also his show of his "not ready to father Misao's child" is very realistic and yet very out of place somehow... The encounter between them three has somehow, brings back the "maniac and evil" side of Enishi... How would you write this story should Misao is really carrying Enishi's child? I was just wondering if you intend to develop the story this way... Sorry if I'm wrong in my guessing.

Anyway, you made my day! I'm so happy that u updated. Keep up the good work and please update again soon... _

The only thing that really irks me is the lack of breaks whenever the scene is different. It becomes a bit confusing to me.

About the last scene. ...Whoah. Intense. It's a little strange though, because I actually -like- the fact that Misao broke off the kiss. It really must have been too much for her. Their relationship (if I can even call it that yet) must be too overwhelming and much to sudden...The action just seemed so...real.

Awesome storytelling. I just hope you can find the time to edit any formatting problems, like the lack of breaks I mentioned before. Anyway, good job. I hope this helps.

Hahahaha. Enishi thought he was rid of her didn't he? Nope! Reading your story makes me feel really giddy. I'm not sure if this is an appropriate reaction.

There are some grammar issues here and there (but then again, who doesn't have that problem?).

One thing I noticed was verb tense. The passages tend to shift between present and past, and though it is not all that noticeable, the paragraph may seem...cleaner if tense remains constant. Sorry, just a bit of constructive criticism.

It seems as if it has been a while since your last update (according to the story info) so I hope you can find the time and interest to finish this piece.

IrisedLuna

What is your personal website? All I see is -...

I really want to read that part since you said it was crucial to understanding Misao and Enishi's relationship.