haha! I loved it! I will be patiently (or maybe not so patiently) for the next update!

This is sooooooo good. I really wish you'd update it sometime.

Oh my gosh! This story is amazing! I love the movie, especially Jackson and Reiben in it...maybe Jackson a bit more than everyone else ;) Okay, A LOT more! But please update soon. I'd love to red what's gonna happen next :D

Your story IS well written, I'll give you that, but Saving Private Ryan is a war movie about tragedy,loss, the bravery of our troops, and WWII, not your OC loving the two leads.

you know what i have to say about stuff... i didnt feeel all that close to the.. later events of the chapter ;) but nice cliffhanger, i know you have potential to write and im looking forward to reading it

you personally seem to be favoring team reiben, but i like jackson hm.. blabhblah whatever happens, happens

i have to get this out: you should try writing like youre actually there, experiencing all little details and the essence of the characters. its like acting in a play. become the chaacters and write so it all flows and makes sense naturally and itll get better. because of that, caparzos death couldve been written a lot better. i didnt really even bat an eye and their bro-sis relation was suddenish cause there was no inner details to back it up and make the story flow smoothly from one idea to the next. yes, youll need to write a lot more but in the end, its definitely worth it. its better to read something with a soul than a plethora of events with no solidness. you need mortar for your bricks youre trying to be aztec but no one can, if your catching my metaphor

woahhh pretty choppy. i had trouble keeping track of where you were and what you were doing. also, i thought she was jack in the beginning for a bit. twas confusing... i shall read the rest tomorrow

This is an awesome story! I can't wait to know what happens next! Keep up the spectacular work! :)

Aww! I hate that kraut basturd that killed Carpazo and Wade. Oh and I hate Upham cause of what he does at the end...Make more soon

Im stuck between the two I love them both Reiben needs more love but I also like jackson

Another great chapter! Can't wait for more :)

Great chapter! Team Reiben! Woot! Keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Love, love, love!

Well done with the third chapter, and the start of your other story. I'm a tiny bit of a Giovanni Ribisi fan, so ignore my pleas for more Wade. I don't think my want will ever be fullfilled, LOL. I'm interested to see where this story is going, so PLEASE don't keep us waiting for too long! :-D