Looks like Granny Patty's finally gonna get served hers cold like the overdue, burger Josef Stalin used for a sex toy and, threw into a nuclear trash can she is. I really like how you stay faithful to the series and needless to say play your OC as realistically badass as possible.

Speaking of Stalin, I highly recommend that if you want your OC to really get the best of Buttalaika, chip away at her ego and what's left of her sanity till she gets ultra-paranoid like her aforementioned, spiritual father, Stalin and aggravate her till she loses it and starts killing off her own "comrades" like Howard Saint from The Punisher 2004 movie. And if possible in a sense of poetic justice get Her tricked into the same trap where poor Hansel met his, or her cosmically tragic death. But to twist the knife further Balalaika lives the rest of her years only to fight a war she was never trained to fight and will painfully and predictably lose; a war with the hatred of she has spread through humanity from her unnecessary and perverse, butchery of civilians just for having remote knowledge of her victim's existence. Or dare I say als ENVY!

I imagine that the main reason Balalaika enjoys murdering people (and not her fellow criminals but, genuine human beings who fit the same bill as Rock) is because she can't stand the idea that they will fulfill their goals and dreams unlike her. Her dream of Olympic Stardom was denied by unscrupulous politicians for the sake of funding their self-defeating, half-assed attempt at conquest of the middle east (yeah, the U.S. Government should talk). And if you think about her mental health it's safe to say her face and almost half her skin isn't all that's overdone. In my opinion her atrocities against "human beings" fit the bill of a complete monster in my book and having mooks who enjoy said shameless actions all the same is no redeeming quality, it's more like an army of complete monsters worshiping a higher tier, complete monster like a pagan, goddess who gluttonously, hungers for human souls, especially when their iced with bright futures. If She is a goddess she's the goddess of all things universall ugly.

And her so-called "comrades" like hers look the type to jump when I say so, even into friggin a lava pit suck dick literally because, they are weak-willed drones and in Soviet Russia men are totally fate's gimps that freeload off my own brainpower. With friends like them I wouldn't need enemies so I'd rather ditch them or if that's impossible blow my head off. No way in hell would I wanna lose my soul to those empty meat puppets who are OVER 9000x emptier than the bullet shells dropped from their AK-74s! Boris is the only decent member I see as human considering his reaction to Hansel's death, maybe. But even in the military his balls didn't get any bigger they got smaller as they say in Soviet Russia. And is predictably too much of a pussy to object his orders or bitch slap some sense into his captain like a real man, much less recommend she have a therapist appointment or better yet a plastic surgeon! He was better off facing his fears and bullies with real friends than the military now he's a failure to his Captain as a true comrade.

Please update ASAP, and consider using the ideas in this review while at it. Just promise that Balalaika will get her slow and painful just desserts I described like that of Jonathan Kreese from Karate Kid ("For Person with no for no forgiveness in heart, living even worse punishment than death

"-Miyagi). I can't think of a more fitting sendoff for her than spending the rest of her life confronting all the "human" lives she f***ed up.

Here's a monologue to a possible ending to your fic that would sound awesome.

Your OC to a badly beaten but, still living Balalaika: "In hell I hear there are demons of all shapes and sizes. Oh yes, I'd fit right in Balalaika! But for a certain, doted Daddies Little Girl who tried to make him proud ,but in end only dishonored him in every meaning of the word to hide her failure, her pitiful bitterness and envy for others with wonderful dreams and futures by pretending to be a goddess to the whole world, I'm afraid she's in for a long and painful eternity!"

Well you're writing style and grammar isn't bad but try not to make the New OC's border into super powered Gary and mary-stus.

Give the main characters more screen time like Rock and Revy...

Detailed, interesting, and very faithful to Black Lagoon. Great work, looking forward to the rest.