that's story's interesting!

Please, write more and more!

I'll be waiting VERY patiently for anything;D!

See ya pretty soon!

Don't stop writing the next chapters!

That stroy is VERY interesting, so...Write more & more:XD!

Remember _ I'll be waiting VERY patiently;)

See ya preety soon;D!

Nice chapter :)

Kenya going into heat? Genius! That was hilarious.

It's me, again!

That story's start to be VERY interesting. Please - Continue that;)!

I'll be waiting PATIENTLY for the next chapters of this;D!

P.S. - For EVERY fan/Fangirl of ''Sonic the Hedgehog", ''Ratchet & Clank", ''Jak & Daxter" & ''Sly Cooper" video games serieses!

I have a GREAT news for EVERYONE - In 2014 Sega, Insomniac Games, Naughty Dog & Sucker Punch(TOGETHER) will create the...anime TV series and anime feature movie, which will be a BIG crossovers with those 4 COOLEST video games serieses!

I'm NOT kidding - I send the letters to Sega(U.S.A., Jp. & U.K.), Insomniac Games, Naughty Dog & Sucker Punch about that, honest!

One more thing - In this anime series & movie Ratchet will try to save his species, so he'll must choose a girl, who will help him with that.

He'll be have to choise:

Angela Cross

Sasha Phyronix

Talwyn Apogee

And the new character, Amethia the Fecava, she'll be apears in this anime series & movie with a female robot named Cutie.

Anyway, you'll see ALL in 2014;D!

What do you think about that?

I think i'ts...TOTALLY AWSOMEXD!

See ya again soon;D!

This story's coming along really well, and what a twist with Clark coming back! I'm thoroughly enjoying it :)

Oh my!

I'm actually kind of scared! :O

Great job! :D

Hi!

I'm the Biggest, FAithfull and Truest Fangirl of ONLY 4 video games serieses:

Sonic the Hedgehog

Ratchet & Clank

Jak & Daxter

Sly Cooper

.

That story is EVEN interesting. Please, Don't stop writing it;D!

Remember - I'll be waiting VERY patiently for more & MORE;)!

See ya soon!

Ha! If only I had thought of clothing issues in regards to having a tail in my own fic! I laughed at the mention of Kenya's 'experience' getting dressed.

It's also entertaining to see Ratchet deal with a problem as mundane as bills.

I would recommend you split your paragraphs a bit more. Reading blocks of text becomes MUCH easier if they are smaller.

Also, I have a hard time imagining Ratchet say something that lasts several sentences at a time, but otherwise he seems right in-character. You nailed Clank in my opinion.

I'm not sure you needed to invent an entirely new species just to avoid unoriginality, especially in a universe where lombaxes are so prominent. I've no reason against it, though.

Great story anyway. Looking forward to more.