| Reviews for Keeping Secret |
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Valkariekain 2/17/13 . chapter 28oh my god i need that epilogue. this has me like crying for it. |
EndlessChains 1/21/13 . chapter 28This has been quite a read. It was exciting and lovable. There was a lot of fluffy moments and intense moments. I didn't think Hikaru had it in him to nearly rape Haruhi and the way Tamaki got mad was really scary. There was a lot of funny parts in this story. When they went to Hokkaido and Tamaki came in the way of them kissing. It was really good and the way you portray the characters was done nicely even if it was a little OOC. The ending was sort of a surprise, especially to see how much of an influence Kyoya was to Haruhi when they dated for a year. The situation where Haruhi doubts Kyoya a bit is very believable and well written. The story felt realistic in a way. Thank you. Keep up the good work. |
Destinies Entwined 1/10/13 . chapter 28Can't wait to see what the epilogue brings! o Omedetougozaimasu! WHat a great story! :) |
Destinies Entwined 1/10/13 . chapter 15Konbanwa, Hana-san! I've been reading your story for the last day or two, and I am astonished that I have finally edged past the half-way point. I love long, well-woven tales! :3 I can't stop reading! So far, so good! Plot development, characterization, and such... (Poor Tono! too little, too late, it seems!) I gotta say the only thing that kinda bothered me was the Hikaru incident, but I worked past that. Speaking of which, in this chapter you allude to Haruhi having NOT told Kyouya what happened, but I thought she had. Back in chapter 3 or 4, ne? That's the only glitch that's seemed to jump out at me. Everything else has been awesome! |
Angelmoon1089 1/8/13 . chapter 20I have just read your story and I love it. I was just wondering if you are going to post anymore since the last time you posted it was back in 2012. It has almost been a year. I would really like it if you would get back to me and let me know if you are going to continue on with your story. |
mtnikolle 12/28/12 . chapter 28I'd worry much less about OOCness at the end of the relationship fic, than at the beginning... being in a relationship changes people. I really enjoyed reading this version of Kyoya and Haruhi's relationship. |
The Mourning Dragon 12/21/12 . chapter 2Zombie girlfriend? Egads! Kyouya's a necrophilliac! |
Lexi-Chan16 11/28/12 . chapter 28awwwwwww so sweet I loved the story |
DBZZY 9/14/12 . chapter 28is there still some drama coming up? |
laughtillyourstomachhurts 9/13/12 . chapter 28Please upload the epilouge already! Pwwweeeeaaassseee? 0.o |
Ginger-Megz 9/10/12 . chapter 28Wow just got done reading your story and I loved it. I had a smile on my face the whole time hehe. The story was great and I really can't wait for the epilogue, I wasn't that big on KyoHaru but this story made me long this couple. Keep writing, your story was great. I really couldn't stop reading. :) |
Cactus2008 9/10/12 . chapter 28 Hurray for a Shadow Queen victory! Truly a match for the Shadow King. Enjoyably fluffy ending to a fun fic. Thanks! |
Artemis-Sadie-Athena-Piper.kim 9/9/12 . chapter 28awww. |
Inujuju712 9/9/12 . chapter 28Nice! good job can't WAIT TIL the epalogue |
MizzAnime 9/9/12 . chapter 28lol... continue! |