|Reviews for The Twist|
| Guest 6/16/13 . chapter 9
wow oh wow.
| black neko hime 6/13/13 . chapter 9
Cain and Setsu
Kuon/Ren and Kyoko
Tatsuya and Sakura
The names don't matter; no matter what she's driving him crazy. Kyoko definitely felt something. Ren did a good job of not letting things go too far. I'm glad Setsu thought it was enough. Probably, in part, to the limitation of what Kyoko has seen of intimacy (on TV) and in part because she's still Kyoko no matter what.
Hopefully, Kyoko will be able to marry him as herself someday.
| Askosh Mosey 6/11/13 . chapter 9
Sweet baby paprika.
Such an intense.. Such an intricated.. What a twist!
Really, I wonder who bless that brilliant brain of yours. This is no easy piece. But this is such a magnificent plot and universe. I really do hope the force of writer's spirit will always be in your favor.
| Guest 6/11/13 . chapter 9
ahahahahaha oh man i wonder what kyoko's reaction will be to the kiss xD
| Shizuka ni Hanasa 6/11/13 . chapter 9
OH MY GOD! I love it. :D Iloveitiloveitiloveitiloveit. You portray the characters so well! Not to mention I love the Heel siblings! Please write more soon!
| Collaborative Lady 6/10/13 . chapter 8
Just reading this chapter with a growing sense of wondermen - *squee!* for parallels.
| CEA 6/9/13 . chapter 9
Thank you for updating even after all this time! I love the tension you're describing that so well.
| dancingfingers 6/9/13 . chapter 9
I really love how you write this in Heels' pov. there are so much emotions and my heart goes for them, even though I knew how.. complicated things are. thank you for updating!
| TMNinjaGinga 6/9/13 . chapter 9
Oh the angst, the drama! Very nicely done - I think that was really tasteful considering the subject matter. Looking forward to the next chapter and more of the wonderful character development that is going on :)
Keep up the good work!
| Xxsturzen into phantasiexX 6/9/13 . chapter 9
:O ooooooo did it just get hot in here? I love it...love how you interpret Setsu...very clever. Can't wait for the next chapter xD
| J Luc Pitard 6/9/13 . chapter 9
Kyouko, Setsu, Sakura... Ren's in big trouble! All of them want him and he wants all of them, BUT it's wrong in 2 cases due to the incest taboo and wrong in 1 case due to the emotionally stunted teenager taboo. I can see him holding on to his sanity for only so long in any of their roles. I liked the image of him fighting with himself as he makes Sakura wait.
| fic's skip beat 6/9/13 . chapter 9
| Trinity1012 6/9/13 . chapter 9
Intense! Ahhh! A Cain and Setsu kiss! I wonder where that's gonna lead! Hahaha! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
| evilteddybear 6/9/13 . chapter 9
Thanks for the update!
| black neko hime 6/4/13 . chapter 8
Wow. Well done!