Totally awesome. I love it. I can SO see Vivianne in the musical breaking up in such a way with Warner, You have done a fantastic job!

Good for Vivienne! I think Warner wasn't worth anything. Also, I don't think his decision to break up with Elle right at the beginning was stupid, if he actually loved her.

Good story!

This was good! Short and sweet, I liked it! I especially liked the last line about Elle :) Great job!

Very good idea! We never do actually find out what happens betweem Warner and Vivienne in the musical. This has a ctuslly inspired for some of my own work!