Favorite line I've ever read,"now he and the horseman live happily in the Tree of the Dead."

Just beautiful and very seductive! Keep writing!

That was alright but it was a little difficult to read. Most people probably wouldn't even try to read it. I'm just going to suggest that you separate the paragraphs rather than making it all one big jumble. That makes it easier to read.

LOVE IT!

i wish there were more ichabod/horseman stories like this